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Post by SolQet »

hot beat, hot song hahaa
lemme kno wat chall thank!
one loove
~SolQet


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Post by - Mutual - »

can i use it for the Illest Mixtape Vol.3 please get back to me

yeah hot beat not that good fo me tho
ya lyrics was dope has sum good imagery
the hook was pretty good catchy IMO
ya had that emotion n shyt really good
keep'em comin
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Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
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I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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Post by SolQet »

thankyouu, its strait if ya use it fosho.
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Post by PIRATEPRODUCTIONS »

yea this iz a hot song, nicely done
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Post by Logic »

haha..you dirttyy girl!!

if im honest..its not my thing..ill tell you why..

i dont really feel the provocative thing from ladies..especially when its real dirty..just seems a bit cheap..if you know what i mean? i hope your not offended..thats just my take

i do like the hook though..and girl youve got a great flow and can tell you have the ability to make a killer track..i like your voice..did you make the beat as well?

hit me up when you put your next track up id be interested to hear it!

peace
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Post by TreTru »

okay?..niice..

first verse is nice..flow is steady..delivery is gettin better...

that hook aight..uhh the presence gettin better gut i think da emotion may
need a lil more of a bump...IMO still doin good..

whaaatt that second verse is lyrically...nevermind i better not..lmao
yeah let's say i reeeallly liked it..haha your a lyrical monster..

good shyt..
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Post by SolQet »

lol finallly some feedback. yeah, da provocative thing isnt really my direction eitha. but i thought, hey, what tha hell. lol somethin different. mos my trax are real emotional so i thought id switch it up n drop some lil kim type shit hahaa. but thanx fo tha feed guys. i got mo comin real soon!

~SolQet
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Post by Kurse »

Man...I have to disagree with Logic. Any female emcee can grab a mic and spit sumthin lyrical and "classy"
...but it takes real guts and gull to be a female and spit sum of the dirty shit that real niggaz like to hear! And if you can do it without even blushing, then that's even doper! haha
Real dudes like to hear real things. And perverted or not...you shouldn't worry about what people think so long as your going up there and sayin shit that you know grabs the spot-light. These are real thoughts...men like hearing that shit...what more needs to be said than that!?
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Post by Haz »

Lmao ^ that's Basically What All Female M-C's Are about ....

Anyways your Real Monotoned...
But This was decent , you Got perverted , So you Reached your Goal...

Keep Droppin
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nicely done....

Post by Problemz »

beat nice, flowed nice, goodshit.... 8/10 from ya boi Prob-Z...
1 thing i think u should focus on shrty, try ta put som mo emotion in ya joints cuz i gotta agree wit whoeva said b4, IMO ya soundin a lil monotone.. but otha than that still a nice drop 4sho.... keep doin ya thang lil mama!!
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Post by Kurse »

I don't think she sounds monotone at all. I think you guys are mistaking it for "lack of emphasis"
...she's not emphasising certain words the way she could in order to give them that "impactful" feel. But I wouldn't call that monotone.
There's quite a few kats that have dropped good examples of monotone here on illest..this is not one of them. lol
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Post by HKX »

dis track came outta nowhere nice switch up pimp I gotta agree wit sum of da niggaz tho there is a lil lack in emotion IMO shit is a dirty track no lie but a lil more emotion could've helped out on da track imma give u a 8.5/10 cuz of ur emotion girl, I really wanna see u pick up on ur emotion cuz I kno u got it in u 2 do dat ur good 4 a femcee and I dis track had me rollin and all I see u got da niggaz attention which is good shit

I hope da next track u drop I feel dat emotion keep doin u and go out on da mic when u spittin' them rhymes aight girl I kno u got dat shit in u so lets go do u 1
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Post by SolQet »

thanks fo tha feed yall, im glad ya digged da track. oneloveee
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Post by TreTru »

SolQet wrote:lol finallly some feedback. yeah, da provocative thing isnt really my direction eitha. but i thought, hey, what tha hell. lol somethin different. mos my trax are real emotional so i thought id switch it up n drop some lil kim type shit hahaa. but thanx fo tha feed guys. i got mo comin real soon!

~SolQet
aint nothin wrong with bein provocative...haha..dass hott..contraversy
helps sell records too..
honestly IMO. if your feelin what ya sayin that's all that matters.anyones
best chance is to make sure the package is well presented..Delivery,mic presence emotion,mixxing/production..the rest is an individual opinion
as far as if THEY feel they like it..but the better it sounds the more likely
they'll accept you as a tru artist..IMO
anyway good shyt..
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Post by SolQet »

yeah i kno what ya sayin.. i actually put alotta thought inta the lyrics, n i was/am really feelin em. plus, alot of the lyrics are directly referencing my boyfriend. all my tracks are personal, apparent or not. but i agree, nuttin wrong wit bein provocotive, im a scorpio fo fucks sake! lol (dats where my name SolQet came from btw)
anyway, thanks Tru
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