Life Ripped Apart Part TWO.....

[Darth Vader]

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/life- ... 12688.html <----PART ONE


Imagine yourself - your life ripped away from you/
imagine your health - your mind slips away from you/
your wife's dead, her last moments drowning underwater/
your child in her womb, who'll never live to be a toddler/
you worked so hard - trying to build a happy life/
never cheated in school, never cheated on your wife/
never fell to peer pressure, you looked the other way/
worked hard to be successful, didn't sell drugs to get paid/
got right with God, and wished your enemies all the best/
yet the life you worked so hard for, in a minute laid to rest/
feelings of depression - thoughts of suicide and death/
thats what I was thinking of - taking my last breath/
instead I bought a couple clips, and a couple vests/
a 45, 9 and eagle, the whole fuckin nest/
armed to the tits - vicious crazy mother fucker now/
uncontrollable - havin' crazy mother fuckin cows,
went to my office desk and planted some C4/
as I drove away - BOOM - thats the end of Seymour/
the fuck you looking at me for? bitch I'm straight loco now/
faked away my identity, no time to be a joker now/
went to check my man in the hood, he got connections/
told him I ain't sweet no more, no fuckin affection/
no more soft emotions - i'm on the loco-motion/
he directed me to the Italians by the ocean/
I walked into a bakery - asked for my man Paulie/
they let me in the back, down the stairs is where he saw me/
"you grew up" - he said when I looked him in the eye/
"I'm lookin for some work, I'm a special kinda guy"/
"the family's been looking for a special guy like you"/
"we got a couple hits, I need you to take out some crews"/
"no problem, I'm in, gimme the info and directions"/
"here son, remember it's on me you're my selection"/
I get to the spot now and it's then that I realize/
my wife's purse is in that room - these must be the fucking guys/
I smash in the door - walk up in there, guns blazing/
I'm angry, tunnel vision got me straight gun crazing/
I get one of 'em in the face - he goes down instantly/
the other runs out the back - he's so scared to see me/
I run past the dead body - pick up his shotty/
outside, the rain hits my face - can't see in front of me/
JAB from the side - shit this dude's stabbing me/
we wrestle to the ground - now he's smack-grabbing me/
I get the knife - then I stab him in his abdomen/
another in his shoulder blade - now I'll make him half a man/
yeah he killed my wife - so I cut out his fuckin manhood/
then I watch him die slow - fuck it felt so damn good/
I walk away - the rain leaves no trace of evidence/
I put the knife in his hand - I head back to my residence/
I see squad cars as I pull up - investigations/
they saw how the dead family lived - no hesitation/
I head to the bank and withdraw all my money/
now I'm on the road - ain't a damn thing funny




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[GrimBlaze]

nice drop..i like this better than part one, you elaborate the story a bit more, would like to hear this on an audio cos for me the flow got a little stuck in places but overall its pretty goood.
keep droppin.

[K KiLLaH]

ur def a good concept writer you know how to stay on topic(even though the topis is depression and i think u should pop some zannex after writing that lol) and keep ur rhyme scheme JUST work on ur flow though its the route on which ur message is delivered and you want it to be as smoothe as possible.

[Darth Vader]

thanks for the f/b...yeah this was a raw off-the-top sequel...like I said on an earlier post, if I had the means to record some of my shit on audio it would definitely be a step forward, so if y'all have any info that could help me do that I would appreciate it no doubt....1