yo

[repteelay]

cut ya throat so fast ya scream in silence
not even in ya most decievin dreams could you c this violence
couldnt stop it if u creep with riots
of people on ya team comin ta make me bleed
no ease im sinical, dispensin my bullits i bet
my clip is full..... hit me 4 a battle im here

[Charlie Da Genieus]

listen REPTEELAY
i got something to say
this is how yo rhymz sound
so its comin out gay/

sorry to intrude
but it needs to get fixd
here comes BOB DA BUILDER
n its lookin like this/

this is where your wrong
your structure needs to improve/
it needs a vision of a GENIEUS
n dat person aint you/
for just a one time fee
ill let you battle wit me/
ill let you say you flowed against
da dopest rapper to breath/
see my flow is smooth/
n so many agree
im like a LIFE LINE wit REGIS
but wit out KATHY LEE/

If there comes a time
dat your backs against da wall/
dont let my smash
to your REP/
hinder you to call/
it took some nutz to call someone
to battle on this site/
so now you not an enemie
to me
you alright/

[ugly]

dont ever put bob the builder in ur raps. No length in ur bars, weird structure. And the flow was off each line just made it worse. I dont know wat to tell you, just provide us with that flows and fuck the punchlines n metaphores

1/10

[Charlie Da Genieus]

Not even on ma level kid...But ill take the criticism anytime...
DEE DEEDEE...

[ugly]

on ur level?? lol then right sumthin worth reading

[Charlie Da Genieus]

You want a sic topic..I got you...