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i've been cold hearted, stay blazin' on other guys
one hand slits a throat, the other's playing with butterflies
some dudes stay rappin' money, so they stay in the gutter, why?
i get mad n' i snap, some g;s get sprayed through their mother's eyes..
people rhymin' about wealth, but they need ta stop it
claimin' they all around the cheese, like pizza toppin's
this millenium been easy, i've elevated past the best one
if other rappers are mirrors, then i'll have bad luck to the next one
you need'a hope better, clown ass dude, a broke jester
this is our ring bitches, you faggots just the rope testers
i feel like the little kid who done reached his idol
theres NOBODY i couldn't smash... so you can keep the title
did it my way, fuck everyone! this is where you get shanked, at
if you put ya last dollar on me, i bet you get tha bank, back
leavin' name's deaded, all this shit n' i know where the blames headed
i see dude's spittin' the same lines, yet gettin' the same credit
these weak disses BENEATH me, petiness would be disgracin' ma health
'specially cause im sicker than a paedo going back in time n' rapin' himself
im that dude.. lyrically.. NO fucker can see me..
funny thing is EVERYONE says it.. difference is that most people believe me..
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Post by ugly »

This was a cooh verse off the top, sum bars looked like they were there to full in some empty space but its okay mane 4/10

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these weak disses BENEATH me, petiness would be disgracin' ma health
'specially cause im sicker than a paedo going back in time n' rapin' himself
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Post by Cuttin P »

yo know what i liked this drop... i like ya ego on this joint... clearly you feel like the don right now lol. Aint shit wrong with that...good shit!

some dudes stay rappin' money, so they stay in the gutter, why?

-man that's true as hell... lol
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