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Post by SolQet »

Watsgoood, da names SolQet of AME.. im new to Illest but my man Viral has been a member fo a while so i kno a lil bit. Heres my newest track "Storm".. it comes strait from da heart n da lyrics are bout my sister n some of da struggles we been goin thru lately, leave me some feed! n ill get chu back. More to come!
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Post by Kurse »

HaHa...glad to see you joined the site.

Everyone show our lil homegurl SolQet sum luv. She's new to the game, just spit her first material just 1 month ago. She's poetry in motion...so she'll be working with us in the lab as we trying to iron her out and help her mold into her own entity and artist. Hope everyone enjoys what she has to share...she's got alot of talent.

Good drop with "Storm"...love that choice of beat and I can hear the confidence improving since your first recording. You're coming along nicely...just give it time and you'll find your comfort zone and knock some real hard ones out the park!
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Post by Lawgix »

woooooooooooooooow this shits pretty fire for real... the hook was ILL... verses were str8... ya presense is there... kinda remind me of MIA... only not shitty haha... newayz good shit for real... really deep i like that deep shit... keep droppin i'm excited to hear more from ya...

give this 7/10... good first drop...
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Post by TreTru »

huh..not bad..actually..
the beat was good..
concept was real solid...
i thought it was a decent drop for sure..

keep doin ya thang..and welcome to the site..
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Post by Young K »

dope track, lyrics are real deep...
good quality, flow is aiight, emotion is there...
work on delivery, good overall track...
keep dropping
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Post by - Mutual - »

dope track
the hook was off itself lol (off the hook)
the lyrics were flowin well nice deep shit i cud tell from the heartmaybe a lil bit hesitant with ya lyrics
maybe work on that may help your delivery
maybe need a lil bit emotion
but nice beat dope song all together
jus a bit of shit too work on yaself
keep'em comin
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Post by HKX »

Welcome 2 illest pimp I noticed dat most of ur tracks r bout life and all which is sick i do da same u headin in da right direction wit ur shit da more u practice and record da more you'll sound more emotinal on a track, besides dat u don't lack n e thing really u ride da beat well, ur shit on point, I jus need 2 feel dat emotion a lil more and ur there so keep recordin good muthafuckin drop 4 real all ur missin is more emotion on it my nigga aight dats bout it i could hear it comin thru pimp stay up aight peace
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Post by SolQet »

thaanks to all yall dat left me some feeed! its definately appreciated.
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Post by Onediversekid »

I love the poetic feel of your words, it's something I don't hear a lot on here and it's something I'm definitely into. I thought the beat fit the mood very well, although I wish you could have done a little more with the chorus.

The only thing I would ask you to improve on (and HKX mentioned this), is your emotion. Once you get that down, I'm sure your music will be absolute fire. Overall I enjoyed the track, and I'm definitely interested in hearing more from you.

Also, since your part of A.M.E.. I thought it would be cool to do a track together. I think our styles would mesh really well. And HKX.. I want to collab with you as well, so holler at me when you have the time. I'm sure we can drop a bomb on these folks.
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Post by SolQet »

hell yeahh.. im down fosho! jus get at me n let me kno wats good.. n thanks fo da review on Storm
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Post by Dead Silence »

this was deep shit
real good shit
lyrics were straight
ur flow is different
its poetical
like kurse kinda said
which could be a good thing if u can hone ur skills and master it

7/10
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Post by CHAMELEON »

flow is on point, at times it sounds as though you are just reading the lyrics, other times I can hear the emotion in the lines, that needs to be more consistent throughout but your flow was very smooth, laid back style I liked it, your style is very easy to listen to, once you find what you feel comfortable with I think you could be very very good.
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wheres the chorus from?
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i honestly got no ideaa
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Post by Problemz »

For only recordin for a month gurl, u deff doin really good. Tru talk. Nice wordplay, but it kinda sound like ya readin more than ya spittin, but ull git ya flow down wit time. keep doin u shrty.
im lookin forwared ta hearin more in tha near future.
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