LOTUS VS QUIX

Quix · Post by **Quix** » Fri Feb 20, 2009 2:29 am

house rules, 5 barz

Lotus · Post by **Lotus** » Fri Feb 20, 2009 11:35 am

check

who gonna go first?

meh ima get my ass handed to me either way lmao

Dead Silence · Post by **Dead Silence** » Fri Feb 20, 2009 3:20 pm

Its House Rules
Doesn't matter
No Flipping

Lotus · Post by **Lotus** » Sun Feb 22, 2009 7:12 pm

ight my bad for takin a minute

son please, if it werent for that avatar youd have no game,
all this weak shit you droppin.. kid.. do you have no shame?
talkin bout bein the father of 6, actin like robert reed?
if you hold the crown, im ROBBIN reed, see you forgot to read,
the fine print, cuz these lines split your mind quick like neurology,
why's quix so slow? shit it seems like he tryna follow me,
for real, whyd you even call me out..
kid you talk big like you got jay z's lips on ya mouth,
im jus like shit.. "bring him out" youll be the kid everyone else forgot about,
one day you jus wandered out, saw a maniac on his normal route,
that maniac proceeded to knock you out,
drag you to a haunted house n now you HAUNT that house

Dead Silence · Post by **Dead Silence** » Mon Feb 23, 2009 3:06 pm

Uppin 4 Quix's Verse

Lotus · Post by **Lotus** » Fri Feb 27, 2009 1:24 am

where u at

Quix · Post by **Quix** » Fri Feb 27, 2009 4:22 am

SORRY, I'LL DROP RIGHT NOW!

Quix · Post by **Quix** » Fri Feb 27, 2009 4:53 am

Quick shit, Should still murk him!

I move wid purpose, and spit EXPLICIT SHIT very in depth and DESCRIPTIVE BITCH!
this dude'll 'Decline HArd' plus i'm never 'Behind (in) bars' like CONVICTED KIDZ
this 1 on 1 don't bring yah squad cuz dah forty CAL, WILL SPRAY YAH RELATIONS!
but you should 'Contact help' cuz i'm a 'Subtract L' like ALGERBRAIC EQUATIONS
you awfull, you'll get NO HYPE OR SHIT! get POKED or this JOKE MIGHT GET HIT!
you ain't 'SHit Bro' so watch me 'Get Lo' like FLOW RIDAH DID!

Lotus · Post by **Lotus** » Fri Feb 27, 2009 6:48 pm

lol.

ight.... lets get some votes ppl

btw i cnt believe i was right about you bein slow lmao took ya ass like 3 days

Quix · Post by **Quix** » Sat Feb 28, 2009 12:00 am

YOU WEREN'T EXACTLY MY "TOP" COMPETITOR....SO I SORT OF FORGOT ABOUT YOU, LIKE YOUR PARENTS ON YOUR BIRTHDAY! LOL

vote up

Momeijah · Post by **Momeijah** » Sat Feb 28, 2009 12:34 am

Lol This is Actually REALLY Close. Since There's No Voting Cats im Just Gnna List The Essentials.

Punches - Quix. Quix Had 2 Decent Ones (The Conviction Line, Although 'Bar' And Jail Wordplays Are Played as Hell. And The Equation Line). Lotus Had Some Simple Ones Like The Jay-Z And 'Followin Me' Ones But Meh, Simple's Good But They Just Didn't Hit.
Personals - Tied. Never Seen Anything Really Personal in There.
Flow - Lotus. Definitely The Strongest Point Of ur Verse.
Multis - Quix. Both Had Quite a Bit But Quix Had More, And They Were Smoother.
Similes/Mettas - Quix.
Creativity - Tied. Lotus Probably Had More But He Didn't Present it as Well as He Could've.

Vote - Quix (Barely).

Overall This Was a Pretty Weak Battle. Lotus' 1st Two Bars Were Just Filler, The Rest Kinda Got More Dissy But u Didn't Hit Hard With What u Threw. Quix Don't Use Lines Like 'Get Low Like Flo Ridah' Or Any '[Song Name] Like [Artist]' Because They're Basic as Hell And Lack imagination. Also u Need To Present ur Shit Better, Still a Solid Verse Though, Keep Droppin.

Lotus · Post by **Lotus** » Sat Feb 28, 2009 8:30 am

I hope by "present it well" you aint talkin bout caps-lockin every set of multies, quoting punchlines and adding exclamations.

Momeijah · Post by **Momeijah** » Sat Feb 28, 2009 9:35 am

1st Of All i Was Talking To Quix When i Said That. And What i Meant Was Make ur Verse More To The Point, And Straightforward, So People Don't Have To Re-Read The Line.

Votes On Me vs ScottJames Would Be Appreciated Too.

Lotus · Post by **Lotus** » Sun Mar 01, 2009 7:23 am

ight i got you. ill vote in a lil bit im workin on a track rite now

..Compa.. · Post by **..Compa..** » Mon Mar 02, 2009 2:17 pm

Lotus

son please, if it werent for that avatar youd have no game,
all this weak shit you droppin.. kid.. do you have no shame?
..ok opener 1.3/5..

talkin bout bein the father of 6, actin like robert reed?
if you hold the crown, im ROBBIN reed, see you forgot to read,
..ok..

the fine print, cuz these lines split your mind quick like neurology,
why's quix so slow? shit it seems like he tryna follow me,
..lol true though..

for real, whyd you even call me out..
kid you talk big like you got jay z's lips on ya mouth,
..played..

im jus like shit.. "bring him out" youll be the kid everyone else forgot about,
one day you jus wandered out, saw a maniac on his normal route,
..meh..

that maniac proceeded to knock you out,
drag you to a haunted house n now you HAUNT that house
..lol weak closer 1/5..

Quix

I move wid purpose, and spit EXPLICIT SHIT very in depth and DESCRIPTIVE BITCH!
this dude'll 'Decline HArd' plus i'm never 'Behind (in) bars' like CONVICTED KIDZ
..yea behind bar with convict lines are played 1/5 opener..

this 1 on 1 don't bring yah squad cuz dah forty CAL, WILL SPRAY YAH RELATIONS!
but you should 'Contact help' cuz i'm a 'Subtract L' like ALGERBRAIC EQUATIONS
..lol good..

you awfull, you'll get NO HYPE OR SHIT! get POKED or this JOKE MIGHT GET HIT!
you ain't 'SHit Bro' so watch me 'Get Lo' like FLOW RIDAH DID!
..ok closer 1.6/5..

opener/closer- Q

punches- L

personals- L

multies- Q

creative- TIE

metas- Q

flow- L

enjoyed- L

overall vote- Lotous.. bit close actully but quix you should've droped atleast 1 more bar

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