Wow...the Kid is DOOOPE!

[Quix]

I''m baack...





and...

Your in Trouble Dun, cuz I''m Subtle Son! when i Muzzle Gunz
have you Guzzle Cum! then watch you ''Stick to the streets'' like Bubble gum
ain''t buying weed, i fuckin Stole My Cush cuz i''m Cold like Bush!
Out of this world and i''m ''Over the top'' like a Goal Line Push
Stop, I got Glockz Popping yah Grapez, lock & loaded droping the Fakes!
i''m Topping the Greatz! when i ''show you the curtain'' like SHopping for Drapes
so dangereous i got dah Crookz Shaking i make it look Blatent!
then took Bacon(money)! cuz dah strap ''Protects me from beef'' like a Cooks Apron!
Quix fell off....??
listen to these Lyerz Start; i insist you Hire Gaurdz! before dah Fire Sparkz!
you loving Quix! well yah ''Should n yah would'' cuz i''d be ''Good for yah Hood'' like Hybird Carz
i''ll Shoot a faggot! why not? i HArm Pilgrims disregard Burdons!
so Start dah Darn Curtain! cuz when it come to shotz!! i ''Sling More'' than Arm Surgeons
I''m a Thinking Mobtsa; clip dah lama if you Bringing Drama!
I''m Thugging Dog! while you kids ''Rush-in Shots'' like like Drinking Vodka!

[Karnage]

Your in Trouble Dun, cuz I''m Subtle Son! when i Muzzle Gunz
have you Guzzle Cum! then watch you ''Stick to the streets'' like Bubble gum
ain''t buying weed, i fuckin Stole My Cush cuz i''m Cold like Bush!
Out of this world and i''m ''Over the top'' like a Goal Line Push


opener was dope..those were yuh best punchs,,rest was hot 2 buh thats what stood out for me..aye nigguh if u hop on six peep yuh inbox..

[Quix]

yeah word, thankz Famm!


I holla'd back!

[Haz]

This Was Pretty Decent Homie Liked What Karn Pointed Out The Most As Well ..
U Should Try Kickin Some Different Topics .. But Punches Is Deff There...
Keep Doin You .

[Ambiguous Realm]

wat haz said, a different type of topic would be koo, maybe even a descriptive storyline, i don't see too many people droppin those, as usual a lot of nice punchlines..seems to be the theme of this site lately

[Quix]

yup i hear yah!!


i got a topicical on the way!

[Glamtrash]

I'm with everyone else on the whole expand your creativity thing.