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THE SCIENCE OF US

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My friend wrote this and I thought I would steal it and post it up on here... Sooo please leave feed and let me know what you all think.

The Science of Us...

Let's face it "SCIENCE" an awful subject but a concept brought to us by a bunch of brilliant people who came together to figure out "WHAT" things are the "WHAT" they are, and "WHY" things are "WHY" they are... You see "MY GIRL" is a "SCIENTIST"... Well not quite, but she can show and tell me all about science. "HELL" she may as well be a teacher, because until I met her. My heart stayed unchanged by the world around it. It's damn near neandored... That's when she taught me "DARWIN'S LAW" I learned first hand when my heart evolved. BAM! Then came "NEWTON'S LAW" because I TOOK ACTION! Causing the best REACTION known as US... HER and I we had more chemistry then the whole PERIODIC TABLE every COMPOUND we share is STABLE… “THE HYPOTHOSISâ€
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Beautiful.... so simple and yet heartfelt.
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Post by Glamtrash »

I like it. If I were to give it a style I'd group it with "Poet" from OZ (which I've been watching a shitload of in the last couple days). I'm not a fan of that kind of structure, but for this, it works.

we are that something “EXTRAâ€
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He say's thank you for the feed!
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[quote="Double.FL"]I like it. If I were to give it a style I'd group it with "Poet" from OZ (which I've been watching a shitload of in the last couple days). I'm not a fan of that kind of structure, but for this, it works.

we are that something “EXTRAâ€
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