Page 1 of 1

Verse Dropped.

Posted: Mon Feb 02, 2009 3:33 am
by Haz
[align=center]Yeah..

Listen...
My Flow Awakens N Sizzles Prick..Haz Da Wrong 1 To Fiddle With..Tell This Skittle..Git..
Cause He Aint 'Go In Far' Like a Chick's Reaction 2.. Little Dick!!!...
Haz Bin 'Above Mod's Level' Like Ad-min's..Ya Bars R Fastin..i'll Have ya Back Skin'd N Strapd in
A Belt Of Sand Paper..Damn Hater...Who's Laughin?...
Your Short..Stop..i'll Leave You Running-Back..Ya Offensivee Lines...
Are SON'D IN SACKS..Like A Chick Before Puberty..i'll Have This 'YOUNGIN FLAT..'
He Didnt Know Who He Was Commin At!...Puttin That Freestyle Up Is An.. ACCIDENT..WHY!?
Cause You Only 'Pleasin Yaself' Like ABSTINENT..GUYZ..
Tryna Go Major like i can 'DO DIS MAN!'..But U Won't Eva Be On Like a NUDIS'S PANTS..
Ur Known Fa 'Kickin Crap' Like Socca Players Atta SEWIGE PLANT!!
I'm Supplyin Enfliction..'Worse' Then Denyin Addiction
i'ma End 'Modern Days' Like The MYIN PREDICTION!!..
You'll Get Hit By a Cool 'L'..Mister Biss...N Be a 'Bitch That Was Ownd'
Like a Lady Who's Now Misterliss!...
This Was Pritty Fun You Shitty Scum..It Hada Come 2 A SUDDEN END
But Call Me Out Again N You'll Get 'RAN OVER' Like Joe BUDDENS FRIEND!..
[/align]

Posted: Mon Feb 02, 2009 4:33 am
by |.R.SON.aLL.|
Lmao i Think This Was One Of Yo Better Drops ..
Had Some Slick Punches in There Fam ..
It Was On Point Flow Wise ..
& Tha Delivery Was Sick ..
Good Drop IMO

Posted: Mon Feb 02, 2009 6:22 am
by eMCee Havic
lol yeah it was allright.. i liked the kick shit sewage plant line very inventive.. i still think i beat you=...
hahahaha

Posted: Mon Feb 02, 2009 10:47 am
by Haz
If You Say So.

Posted: Mon Feb 02, 2009 12:01 pm
by ÐÛÇ£»
This Drop Was Alright..could of worded some concepts better..
And Arv..You Fucking Suck
..
Haz would murder you..

Posted: Mon Feb 02, 2009 12:48 pm
by Haz
Could Of Elaborated More On The Feed
But Good Looks.. And That Isnt Arv Duce LoL

Posted: Tue Feb 03, 2009 12:18 am
by ÐÛÇ£»
Lmao Damn..
Fuck Arv Anwyay
And Him.
big nosed asians

I seen that ninja turtle as font, and I Just got ready to punch a nigga

Posted: Tue Feb 03, 2009 3:46 am
by Hubris
NICE


i enjoyed the quick easy set ups, punches were straight..no real blinding haymakers but, the accumulation reached a good sum

it started off nicely, i fuqed with the rhyme scheme.

overall

good read.

peace

Posted: Tue Feb 03, 2009 5:06 am
by TreTru
yeah i'm feelin da rhyme scheme on dis one haz..
was a real easy read..def make a good audio too..


!...Puttin That Freestyle Up Is An.. ACCIDENT..WHY!?
Cause You Only 'Pleasin Yaself' Like ABSTINENT..GUYZ..
Tryna Go Major like i can 'DO DIS MAN!'..But U Won't Eva Be On Like a NUDIS'S PANTS

^^^^the kickin shyt punch was good..but dis shit had me roflmao^^^

overall good ass drop dude..

Posted: Tue Feb 03, 2009 5:32 am
by Phasewon
the punches were present, and effective for the most part, although it didn't seem like this would work on a beat with the stretched lines, but strictly 'text' speaking it was nice, keep it up.