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Listen...
My Flow Awakens N Sizzles Prick..Haz Da Wrong 1 To Fiddle With..Tell This Skittle..Git..
Cause He Aint 'Go In Far' Like a Chick's Reaction 2.. Little Dick!!!...
Haz Bin 'Above Mod's Level' Like Ad-min's..Ya Bars R Fastin..i'll Have ya Back Skin'd N Strapd in
A Belt Of Sand Paper..Damn Hater...Who's Laughin?...
Your Short..Stop..i'll Leave You Running-Back..Ya Offensivee Lines...
Are SON'D IN SACKS..Like A Chick Before Puberty..i'll Have This 'YOUNGIN FLAT..'
He Didnt Know Who He Was Commin At!...Puttin That Freestyle Up Is An.. ACCIDENT..WHY!?
Cause You Only 'Pleasin Yaself' Like ABSTINENT..GUYZ..
Tryna Go Major like i can 'DO DIS MAN!'..But U Won't Eva Be On Like a NUDIS'S PANTS..
Ur Known Fa 'Kickin Crap' Like Socca Players Atta SEWIGE PLANT!!
I'm Supplyin Enfliction..'Worse' Then Denyin Addiction
i'ma End 'Modern Days' Like The MYIN PREDICTION!!..
You'll Get Hit By a Cool 'L'..Mister Biss...N Be a 'Bitch That Was Ownd'
Like a Lady Who's Now Misterliss!...
This Was Pritty Fun You Shitty Scum..It Hada Come 2 A SUDDEN END
But Call Me Out Again N You'll Get 'RAN OVER' Like Joe BUDDENS FRIEND!..
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|.R.SON.aLL.|
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Post by |.R.SON.aLL.| »

Lmao i Think This Was One Of Yo Better Drops ..
Had Some Slick Punches in There Fam ..
It Was On Point Flow Wise ..
& Tha Delivery Was Sick ..
Good Drop IMO
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.. it`s S.a.W Bitches ..
.. Niggas ain't Fuckin Wit Tha Team ..

JayGUNNa
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Post by eMCee Havic »

lol yeah it was allright.. i liked the kick shit sewage plant line very inventive.. i still think i beat you=...
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"see you shouldnt be afraid of me..
you should be afraid of all the people in the streets
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If You Say So.
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Post by ÐÛÇ£» »

This Drop Was Alright..could of worded some concepts better..
And Arv..You Fucking Suck
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Haz would murder you..
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Post by Haz »

Could Of Elaborated More On The Feed
But Good Looks.. And That Isnt Arv Duce LoL
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Post by ÐÛÇ£» »

Lmao Damn..
Fuck Arv Anwyay
And Him.
big nosed asians

I seen that ninja turtle as font, and I Just got ready to punch a nigga
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Post by Hubris »

NICE


i enjoyed the quick easy set ups, punches were straight..no real blinding haymakers but, the accumulation reached a good sum

it started off nicely, i fuqed with the rhyme scheme.

overall

good read.

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Post by TreTru »

yeah i'm feelin da rhyme scheme on dis one haz..
was a real easy read..def make a good audio too..


!...Puttin That Freestyle Up Is An.. ACCIDENT..WHY!?
Cause You Only 'Pleasin Yaself' Like ABSTINENT..GUYZ..
Tryna Go Major like i can 'DO DIS MAN!'..But U Won't Eva Be On Like a NUDIS'S PANTS

^^^^the kickin shyt punch was good..but dis shit had me roflmao^^^

overall good ass drop dude..
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Post by Phasewon »

the punches were present, and effective for the most part, although it didn't seem like this would work on a beat with the stretched lines, but strictly 'text' speaking it was nice, keep it up.
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