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Tempest comes drillin through, intentions are killin you
Sent to test I'm the best, won't lose except if I'm willing to
An enigma to any steppin, I'm mangling your whole set
With mics you're 'chokin with a full hand' like stranglin your own neck!
With my words I go far murdering herbs I'm a star
It's like AA, the amount of 'heads I turn with a bar!'
I stay raising hairs/hares so call me the mother rabbit
I'll fuck your mother like a bunny but that's another habit
Brother I've had it, believe I never seen a threat for a long time
But like chatroom pedos I'm still a 'predator on-lines'
I'm infamous I gotta stay alert when I hit the town
Like toilet water I'm totally 'dropping in' when the 'shit goes down'
I'll mismatch you ho, I dispatch a foe, with haters? relentless
You'll never remember an emcee that's greater than Tempest
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Post by Tempest »

No feedback all night? :( Haha
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Post by - Mutual - »

nice flow
the wordplay wasnt bad no excellent
nice rhyming tho dope multies
hadda a good feel to this shit
surprisingly i enjoyed this
i was expectin to read sum crap nobody gives a fuck about but this was dope
keep'em comin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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Post by Tempest »

Thanks, glad it was a good surprise.
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Post by Philosopher Stone »

"It's like AA, the amount of 'heads I turn with a bar!'
I stay raising hairs/hares so call me the mother rabbit
I'll fuck your mother like a bunny but that's another habit"


^^^ That was my favorite.. nice flow good punches..

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Post by Hubris »

Nice lil quick one here..

it was entertaining...so so..

multies an flow were on point..

wouldve like to see some harder punches/concepts..

but theres always the next one..

Keep em comin

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Post by Haz »

stay raising hairs/hares so call me the mother rabbit
I'll fuck your mother like a bunny but that's another habit
Brother I've had it, believe I never seen a threat for a long time
But like chatroom pedos I'm still a 'predator on-lines'



Loved That Part .. I Thought The Flow Was Raw , And The Lines Were Stringed 2getha Well..

Good Shit.
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