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...and a Genius was born! peep dah Vocab

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Whos fucksin wid Quix? Nobody!!








Euhhem!






Quix straight
Subtracting your ambitionz like I''m Surgically Removing your BRainz
Mercefully Diluting your Veins wid Rat Poison n have you Purposely Moving-in Pain
have ya family Urgentlly Moving Again; ya crew, had enough of dah Surgeries, Bruises and sprainz
Quix, Relase da fury, and Vicarious Actionz, like some Terrorist Acts When
i''m cherishing gatz and, under some presure, like if Vex was dis Stories Victim
BUT tEkz give me dah Glory Visions, plus i supply ''Blood to Ok(x)''s'' like Respiratory System (look it up)
You cowardz, puss and Refuting dah Tekz Blaze have ya Heart concluding in Chest-Achs
now he SHooting at Vexx-Face? kell a nigguh, and have his life Concluded like Essays
leave you under ground, like wut a REAL Martyr See-Dog!, so GAurd your G''s Spot
and we know Narkz will see copz, but i''ll inject you wid ''Chalestoal'' till your Arteries Clog
Certainlly your Whack herb; and like your rear end, your Physically an-Ass Sir!
have ya First Person, Greeting A Disasterz, cuz your ''Far from an original'' like thingz Digitally Remastered
yous awfull, stop dah Denial Neglection i Infect Childs Wid Lessons and Style, Inject-em!
leave you ''Phoney Fiegnz ScarD'' cuz you ''only seem hard'' like Erectile Decpetion
Real Recognize Real ... who dah Fuck is you???

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Post by The Gonz »

Pretty good but some of it seemed forced and some of the lines are too long. Other than that, it was dope.
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Post by Quix »

YUP...EACH BAR A LIL LONG...but its because of the content.


Thanks for the feed as allways RUCK!!
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Post by Bonz »

i''m cherishing gatz and, under some presure, like if Vex was dis Stories Victim
BUT tEkz give me dah Glory Visions, plus i supply ''Blood to Ok(x)''s'' like Respiratory System (look it up)
^^^^
U murdered that line my dude killer wordplay and punchline. overall ill as drop my dude i think im a like dis site

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thanks dunny ^^
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http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/lyica ... 11043.html

? dropped this back a while ago lol...
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Post by - Mutual - »

well this was dope
with the vocab
hadda flow with the multies aswell
i thought the lines were aiight
keep'em comin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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