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Just a little somethin some can relate to.

It's nothing strange, straddle the line between love and hate/
We could run away, instead we try to mold it into something great/
We wait it out, even the days we debate and shout/
Ain't an ounce of shame or doubt, even if there was a safer route/
What doesn't kill us, only makes us even madder/
Shift our focus, to climb higher we have to see the ladder/
Each disaster is another chance to fix our ways/
It's our fate, even though our lives are in disarray/
Forget escape, I know you think this shit is worthless/
But you're my missing puzzle piece, even if the picture isn't perfect/
You give me purpose, like a light cracking through the clouds/
I know you're sick of swimming laps in this pool of doubt/
Somehow we make it, sharing these laughs and tears/
Trying to act sincere, hoping that this will last for years/
Look past the fear, you can't say this isn't love/
I may surrender my heart, but it doesn't mean I'm giving up/
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Post by Jesodist »

Deep lil lines inseide this piece flow was smooth like always ruckus

It's nothing strange, straddle the line between love and hate/
We could run away, instead we try to mold it into something great/

Nice shit homie^ i can really feel where yo comin from.
Keep droppin bro.
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Post by - Mutual - »

pretty good
nice emotion an feeling
sum good multies
a good read i would say
all though coulda brought sumin else
i still think this was pretty hot
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Post by EvilJoey »

Nice


Flow was on point..
No killer punches but it wasnt that kinda post...

Deep.. good feeling in the emotion...

Over all nice

Fav Part was the Puzzle piece line.. Fire
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Post by The Gonz »

Thanks for the feed. Bump since Jeso dropped like 800 threads.
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