Suicide Note

[NENO]

Suicide Note

What would you do, if you came home & found the one you love laying in a pool of blood with a gun in her hand & a bullet hole in her head with a note on the table?…..

Papi,
Please take a seat before you read any further
My suicidal thoughts are reasons for murder
Squeezin' the burner, now a mangle of flesh
I'm tangled, distressed, with a pain in my chest
I see black & white; the rainbows have left
I've strangled this stress to meet the angels of death
Purity is tainted, I feel drained & upset
I'm strained, there's no energy attained from the rest
This paper is my canvas, insanely I wept
I guess this brush of death is paintin' me best
In my despair, I'm fallin' closely behind
I'm battlin' a voice that always gloats in my mind
Closing my eyes, I need a sign of hope
Nothin' to me is fine unless I see a shine or glow
To free my mind & soul, I'm not acceptin' this pain
I put my death on your name, now let me explain
First day I saw you, you captivated my heart
I was mad elated at the fact I'm datin' a star
Ecstatic, you got me back to playin' it smart
You just had a way, a knack for statin' your part
These haters aggravated that we made it so far
Thinkin' we're masqueradin' & playin' an art
But before you, I was trapped, layin' in dark
It was hard, livin' every last day with a scar
I walked on emptiness's path strayin' so far
I could feel happiness's laughs fadin' apart
That day in the car, you were holdin' my hand
As we're both discussin' our goals & our plans
Hopes & demands, what we plan to achieve
Made me understand you're the man that I need
That you're my butterfly in the park
There ain't another guy, you're my firefly in the dark
& then you told me I'm lovely
That I was glowin' & bubbly & there's no one above me
Hittin' every topic that we're callin' out next
Told you a relationship isn't all about sex
You assured me, with words so charming
Told me that you would never hurt or harm me
You talkin' that slick, I'm watchin' your lips
'fore we left the park, we sealed it off with a kiss
Beginnin' was good, then it was very stale for me
It got really dreary, nothin' like a fairy tale story
Started bein' aggressive & growin' so rude
That you became possessive, controllin' & crude
Showin' your moods, your anger & hatred
I'm in danger “Who's this stranger I've dated?â€

[- Mutual -]

okay dude this was straight fire
the flow wus great
the feeling was deffo comin strong
u put a lot of thought into this and it was pretty good
when it came out the other side
but a tip other people will not read all of this so try to keep it
a lil bit shorter okay
an hit up the gfx section show us sumin
man stay active
keep'em comin

[TreTru]

pretty dope dawg..I'm into flow and this one was spot on...
it was a little long so I hesitated..but I think it was worth the read..
hott drop mayne..

[HKX]

shit dis was sum deep as shit right here... plex, Kurse da fuckin admins read dis and make it into a Classic dis shit is an Illest Classic in my opinion much props on dat shit da whole fuckin thing was fire keep droppin

[NENO]

Thanks ya'll for the feed, it's greatly appreciated!

[Brah-Vo]

In depth story and the flow satyed on point the whole way through. Even had multis and kept the story on track.
That takes alotta skill.

Agreed with HKX. Illest classic.