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I Can't Take It

Post by Viral »

New Track it pretty much explains itself once u hear it..lol...my guy Matt is on this at the end...peep da track n let me know wat yall think...ill be leavin feed to anyone who leaves me feed...leave me a link er somethin

Recorded/Mixed by:Viral
Lyrics:Viral/Matt Marello


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Post by Onediversekid »

Damn dude, I really like this shit. I thought Matt's part at the end was OK, it sounded a little off to me... but everything else was definitely on point. Now all I have to ask is.. when the fuck are we doin a track haha
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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

matt's part was pretty straight, overall it was pretty dope, liked this better then viral's farm
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Onediversekid wrote:Damn dude, I really like this shit. I thought Matt's part at the end was OK, it sounded a little off to me... but everything else was definitely on point. Now all I have to ask is.. when the fuck are we doin a track haha

thanks for da feed yall...shit man..wenever...get at me...let me kno wats good
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Post by Haz »

The Beat was hott...

The track... I Didn't like....
Felt Like some parts your Flow was jus mashed... & You were readin off Paper...Plus The Chorus wus Sorta Aggrevatin..Emotion was There though i Guess.. The Whole singin Shit At The end you Did was jus Wack LoL
No Offense, not Tryna be a Dickhead jus Lettin you Know whoeva That Was couldn't Sing.. & There Voice jus Aint sound Righ on The Beat Sounded Like Some1 with Throat cancer Tryna Sing a Lullaby.. anyways. i Liked the emotion you Brought forth to This. I See you Have Alot Of YesMen you Should Feel Good about That.
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wasnt me singing
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Post by Glamtrash »

In parts I like it, and in parts I'm like wtf? Is it better than Viral's farm - yes (though not nearly as entertaining). Is it the best you've dropped - no.

Good shit nonetheless. Keep droppin.
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Post by HKX »

u got off on dis track dawg Matt's part sounded a lil weird 2 me but shit goes wit it bro hope u drop more shit on here and on tu myspace and soundclick i'm ready 2 do a collab wit u son so when ever u ready lets get dis shit goin son
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Post by |.R.SON.aLL.| »

This Track Was ... Kinda
Koo?..
idk i Wasn`t Feelin` it Like Everybody Else Was ..
i Felt Like it Coulda Been Pulled Off Better ..
That Endin` Sucked ass ..
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.. it`s S.a.W Bitches ..
.. Niggas ain't Fuckin Wit Tha Team ..

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Post by Haz »

Lmaooo Exactly What I Said Rell...
To Many Yesmen Nowa Days!!..
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Post by Miilz »

LOL@ Throat Cancer ..


Anyways, No Hate Or Nothing But Yeah, i Didnt See a Need For That Singing, Especially From Him. But Yeah, This Track Was Decent, u Needa Work On Ya Flow. Dont Know What Happend To u Man, i Honestly Think u Fell Off, i Heard Ya Verse On That Old Demented Diss Track, u Had a Killa Flow! What Happend? Anyways Keep On Droppin.
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Post by drunken jesus »

dunno why whoever sampled requiem for a dream's theme slowed it down it sounds too unnatural that way, it'd sound 10x better if they would've just kept it at its original bpm or sped it up

verses were alright you need to work on your syntax and staying on topic theres alotta random shit & parts where your just rhyming just to rhyme as opposed to staying on topic

hook was decent had more direction than the verses but it wasn't really catchy, the ending part would've been a better hook but the layers on it are mixed horribly & aren't flush enough & its too loud

overall one of your better tracks but not something i'd bump
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
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Post by Viral »

talk bout mad feed..lol...much appreciated yall...id agree wit DJ on the last part..i didnt mix it all dat well..but then again ive never fucked wit singing n wat not...so i gotta work on dat more...i been a bit busy lately...so ill try to give everyone feed on somethin they dropped as soon as im not so fuckin busy...
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UPPIN
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Post by Lawgix »

yeah this shit was rather random... good none the less... but random as fuck... i guess it goes along with the topic... how ya head goes into a spin and u loose all your focus... the singin i agree with everybody else... it was off... but it was a good track... and yeah... it was better than viral's farm... haha

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