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Beat The Writers Block

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I stun with amazement some of my statements are off the wall like they were done in the matrix
my worst fear of all is becoming complacement, Id rather be hung in my basement
what Im writing is greatness, its time i tighten my laces, I can break this bubble
fighting the latest struggle, feels like every day is pushing weight like a game of shuffle
i aint gaining muscle, I cant remain in trouble, its time that rearrange my hustle
switching in double lanes as i move fast through the track like shuttle trains
the only flame of hope, I see is a change of scope, Im past healing, these feelings can't last forever
their enough cracks in my raps to smash a glass ceiling, I need to put the pieces back together
I just dont know where to do it, music is so theraputic, but when youre stuck with words
you cant bust a verse, everything get on your fucking nerves, its like walmart customers
its such a crutch when you use to be ill in the clutch, youre willing to just let em touch your level
inflate their little egos, than crush the pebbles, like hurricanes wait for the dust to settle
I stand in the basin patient facing the mountain tops without frustration, ready to climb the hills
my rhyming skills brought me this far, Im shining still, you could say that I am ill
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Post by Haz »

This Was a decent Lil Piece,
Beat Your Writers block Good Job ..
Multi's Was There , Flowed Nicely
Had a Few Decent Punches Here And There..
Substance Was Deff There ..


I just dont know where to do it, music is so theraputic, but when youre stuck with words
you cant bust a verse, everything get on your fucking nerves, its like walmart customers

Keep Doin Wud u Do
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