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Quixotic,
Subtracting your ambitionz like I''m Surgically Removing your BRainz
Mercefully Diluting your Veins wid Rat Poison n have you Purposely Moving-in Pain
have ya family Urgentlly Moving Again; ya crew, had enough of dah Surgeries, Bruises and sprainz
Quix, Relase da fury, and Vicarious Actionz, like some Terrorist Acts When
i''m cherishing gatz and, under some presure, like if Vex was dis Stories Victim
BUT tEkz give me dah Glory Visions, plus i supply ''Blood to Ok(x)''s'' like Respiratory System (look it up)
You cowardz, puss and Refuting dah Tekz Blaze have ya Heart concluding in Chest-Achs
now he SHooting at Vexx-Face? kell a nigguh, and have his life Concluded like Essays
leave you under ground, like wut a REAL Martyr See-Dog!, so GAurd your G''s Spot
and we know Narkz will see copz, but i''ll inject you wid ''Chalestoal'' till your Arteries Clog
Certainlly your Whack herb; and like your rear end, your Physically an-Ass Sir!
have ya First Person, Greeting A Disasterz, cuz your ''Far from an original'' like thingz Digitally Remastered
yous awfull, stop dah Denial Neglection i Infect Childs Wid Lessons and Style, Inject-em!
leave you ''Phoney Fiegnz ScarD'' cuz you ''only seem hard'' like Erectile Decpetion
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JUST SOME SHIT I KEYED....came out prettyu raw tho!!
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NO FEED HUH....:(



ahhh well!
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Post by MagicMark »

who's vex ? lol..

overall solid enough key.. nothing crazy stand out..

opening 3 lines where hot.. its odd to have a 3 line rhyme then 2 line rhyme etc etc.. kinda messed with the flow, as your expecting rhyming to be in multiples of 2.. Blood to ox line was cool..

some multis where a lil forced.. physically an ass sir was the main example..

last two bars where cool

overall, cant hate.. solid enough key.. keep dropping
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Post by Quix »

VEX 1 of mah aliases!!


thanks!!
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