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i know im the best.. i dont need votes to prove it
if you think otherwise then you dopes is clueless
leave you like a dentist outta work, you be broke n' toothless
i gotta stop blokes who do this spittin' hopeless music
these cats talkin' bout spittin' "crack", they'll reel back
faggot you aint touchin' drugs.. two Teaspoons of calpol and you feel bad..
for you USA cats i aint explaining a damn thing
you wish you could come with a millionth of what this man brings..
im witty, charismatic, intelligent, brutal..n' you clueless
when i rap they have to make up new superlatives.. they call me Sooshish!...
that mean im better than your dreams dream of what you can be
with these rappers, i choose what to eat.. like stores filled up with candy
i grab the gat, run habitats and pull at ya kin bro
leave alotta people with shootin' pains like bullets through windows
my punches silent and deadly, sound like harpoon's whistelin'
and my brother, i Got' SWAG.. like a Cartoon Criminal..
i slay foes, break bro's and slay ho's
i could rap an apple pie recipe.. and still come with tha KO
you lame so.. i'd get ya whole frame broke
im fightin contracts off, and you gettin' the same "NO!"..
one shot and ya dead, ya done..
you aint living up to the next big thing.. like brock lesnars son


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Post by Haz »

know im the best.. i dont need votes to prove it
if you think otherwise then you dopes is clueless
leave you like a dentist outta work, you be broke n' toothless


Shit jus Hit hard ..
Punchline Was On Some Spazztic Shit LOL..

Flow Came Nice..
you aint living up to the next big thing.. like brock lesnars son

Anotha nice One.

Opener And Closer Were the best..

This piece Overall Was On Point..
Keep Um Comin
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Post by Miilz »

This Was A Tight Drop i Liked ya Flow & Punches ..Sorry Not Gonna Give Quotes But This Whole THing Was Dope..Are You Typing To A Beat? But Yeah ya Flow Was Good Throughout The Whole Thing. Keep Dropping
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Post by complexity »

Smooth drop all the way through.
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Post by ScottJames »

was aiight, i felt ya punches were a bit soft...
flow was on point, multis hit
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Post by Def-init »

"for you USA cats i aint explaining a damn thing
you wish you could come with a millionth of what this man brings..
im witty, charismatic, intelligent, brutal..n' you clueless
when i rap they have to make up new superlatives.. they call me Sooshish!..."

I like ur drop man. That was my fav part in your piece.
Good flow. alright punchs. and you kept on point.
Good work.
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Post by Mac »

Was An Alright Drop, Have A Few Good Punches Here an There, The Structure Of Your Verse Was Pretty Well On Point, Over All Decent Drop.

Keep At It Man.
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