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thought i'd introduce myself and drop a lil something from the lady...key straight off the dome....


Watch prit reek havoc with a {massive verse} crack vocals when i {press reverse} wit tha words hittin hard till i {crash ya hearse} but not until i {mash ya first}...

Cuz the girl knock domes with my crew of {fly-and-high-uprisers} tearin through the newbs I {incise with incisors} with the creativity of about {95 McGuyvers}

So let me rock the homes of {the hip hop drones} till ya see me on X fils cuz {this beasts' unknown} illin the boyz cuz ya know this woman is grown straight tuckin heat till my {cover is blown}

but i don't run with steel {like an amputee} my lyrical fuel only spits {F-L-A-M-E} runnin monopolies cuz chances ain't {gotta thang on me} {let it rain on me}

while i continue to {ground shots to torsos} and {sound plots for more foes} cuz an herb gotta hate when i find {my spot on your dome} release this {tension from my home} in the form of ash from a volcanic cone.

Let this fire flicker on till history has passed, let the haters talk till their egos are gassed float from this hell and be free at last,

not a bad intro, some multies were forced but i can see ya got a decent concept of rhymescheme, i liked the "95 mcguyvers" line lol pretty creative

keep droppin

while i continue to {ground shots to torsos} and {sound plots for more foes} cuz an herb gotta hate when i find {my spot on your dome} release this {tension from my home} in the form of ash from a volcanic cone.

^That was my favorite one, I liked the X-files thing in there too.
Keep doin it good like this man

lol thanks...i haven't keyed in ages...so ya forced that shit..lolz

Definately a nice key-up...good to see females doin their thang in the threads again.

Definately keep droppin Prit

oh u kno..i'll rain on u haha ..whats good mah..nice to see you finally getting sum feedback told you its better than sixshot ..
anyways i've seen better from you but i'll go ahead & give this a 5/10 ..just work on your flow & consistancy

You Did Pretty Straight..
I'm Sayin Come With Some Hard Punches And Stuff...
KEep The Flow Consistent.. I Understand THis a Key Though
BUt SHow Me How Much Potential u Got... 1 Piece isn't Enough lol

ya this definately gives feed...i think imma like it here...nuff bullshit at six...lolz..thanks.

out of the majority of female textcees ur one of the better ones, decent piece, keep droppin

see this the perfect place to be..we not really super active but neither is anybody else so we all on the same level ya feel me

True

$incEar wrote:see this the perfect place to be..we not really super active but neither is anybody else so we all on the same level ya feel me

i like u guys already haha

Interesting drop.

"but i don't run with steel {like an amputee} my lyrical fuel only spits {F-L-A-M-E} runnin monopolies cuz chances ain't {gotta thang on me} {let it rain on me} "

Was ill.
Would like to read some more of your drops. Keep them comin girl!