Competition

[Mass Effex]

This was a battle on another site. Sorry bout the stars
It's not a legit battle for this site so I put it here. I'm J.D.
Feedback please and who you think won

J.D.:
I'm way past greatness...you're barely fine
ya skills probably ain't nothin', compared to mine
listen closely, cause my message is sublime
this ain't the the time, to be spittin' some lame rhymes
this is mad flow, you know you can't mess with it
jump on the stage and leave ya fans desolate
I'll blow up fast you're moving damn slow
I a fukin' arteest like Vincent Van Gough
Cinderella story, without the horse and carriage
life's a *****, I'll leave you without the marriage
go to war with it, make you divorce it
I only spit the truth, yeah I'm on some Al gore ****
I drive the opposite of a 4-6, your like the
cereal rabbit...you can't handle any more tricks
I got fiends outside here, smokin rock
like Jay-Z said, show me what you got


Ghetto:
Time to dust off my mic and play the rhyme game
But I'll be sure to finish within your time frame
Since I know it's almost past your bed time
I'm a murderer so call this a dead rhyme
Like a vetran who just came back from the border
I'm crazy with post traumatic stress disorder
And I'm gonna go hard like it's the fourth quarter
So just sit and watch like a sports reporter
My vocab is unlimited, but you are finite
I just sleep by day and kill your people by night
I spit deadly poison worse cyanide
Hard body nigga so call me iron-hide
And I'm techno-robotic like a transformer
I stay in the street like a street performer
Failure and success, later not the former
I'm changing the world like a terraformer
And the first change will be to end your life
Which was filled with failure and endless strife


J.D.129:
Wanna live the American dream, I'm livin' it
my rhymes could light you up and smoke you like a cigarette
used to have fakeness around and got rid of it
me bussin off with this flow is so imminant
I ain't forgetin it, I can still remember the days
where lyricists could rip it up in so many ways
some **** now has gotta go
vital to the survival though
*****es jumpin' off the game yellin' Geronimo
your is flow mono, my **** is stereo
and your chance for improvein' on it is very low
I'm a hoodlum but never the principal's office
no matter how hard you try you can't stop this
got my hands up, but you can't nail mine
now I'm sittin workin on my bars like jail time
and when I spit I set tracks on fire
make *****es lose they mind like Mariah

Ghetto:
Never in the office? I used to live there
I was a free spirit so I didn't even care
But I'm different know so envoke my spirit
Look deep inside and learn to fear it
Potential so raw that hell couldn't hold it
My flow is wild, no one can controll it
My **** is just straight up outrageous
Like going through the bible and tearing out pages
Life is a movie and you're a comedy
I'm a documentary about the world econmy
From the mind of Peter Joseph, call me Zeitgeist
I will sieze world power and pull a little heist
You're a lyrical hostage and you wont survive
I'll cut ya head off, eat your brains and thrive
I'm the answer to the problem *****, I solve
But you will die because you can't evolve


J.D.129:
Lived in the office? something you should get used to
that's after the ****ing army recruits you
you'll be another shirt, another suit and tie
nothin really special, and I don't wonder why
you wanna get deep? like 10 feet hail?
you say you're the economy cause you're a big fail
comedy? I'm the Dark Knight you can't face it
give you a bad ending like Freddy vs. Jason
I'm the mutha****in general, 22 biscuit
I run this ****...you ain't even enlisted
you probably dead broke, you should go and fix it
I'm a playa, you on some pussy whipped bitch shit
man this is the last straw,
when I ****, i burn rubber like nascar
you're outrageous? ya, ya damn right
you're like a female comin' to a man's fight


Ghetto:
You hate the army and love in the same rhyme
That was contradiction and I caught you this time
Or maybe I misunderstood
But that still aint good
Gotta make your rhymes clear
So I can see as well as hear
As I fill you with fear
Since you are no where near
me
I'm the beast
look me up in the bible
I am the one that wins without using a rifle
Joker was a comedy but ledger was a tragedy
Since tragicly he faded out of this reality
But I kick back and laugh
Because you aren't even half
Half as good as me
As good as I can be
And if you aint as good as me
Then what the hell you gonna be?
You just talk about puss-c
So its easy for me to see
You just like the industry
Which does not include me
You just run your mouth about sex and drugs
So take some salt you stupid slug
You have no awareness of the world around you
You are lucky that I even found you
So I can end you and your stupidity
And unlike you, they can't get rid of me
So I'll blow you to hell with a bit of C4
Then kick back and laugh like no one did it before

[Ambiguous Realm]

in my opinion i thought u won this, overall u both were consistent and had nice puns back n forth, decent flips nothing superb, ur word choice was nice, definitely worth the read for me