My Squad Elite (S.A.W. Diss)

DressToKill · Post by **DressToKill** » Tue Sep 23, 2008 7:52 am

My Crews Insainly Hot,While S.A.W. Is Just Mainly Not
These Dudes Lack In The Pockets More Than New England When Brady Dropped!(Poor)
Il Be Slaying A Hoe,Kids Ask If Dress Is Nice, There Squads Sayin "Fo Sho"
Still Nobody Can See Saw..Hell We Left The Playground Ages Ago! (Get it?)
I Dissed These Cats And They Grew Tempered,Cuz They Know This Dudes Ember
The Only Mill They Ever Had,Was For Wood Cutting Or A CREW MEMBER!
My Hits Will Punch And Tear!Damn Dude We Know S.A.W. Is Fucking Square
Yeah Bill Left Us..Just Cuz The Matchup Before Just Wasnt Fair!
I Play With The Roughest Toys,You Faggots Stay Stuck Fucking Boys
I Got S.A.W. Looking Under The Weather..Like Starring Up At Flyod! (Get It?)
S.A.W. I Stand Tall Man..We Too Clever Up Here Runing All Yall Plans
Cuz Il Leave Ya Looking Blue Jay Something Like A Baseball Fan! Hah
And The Rest Of S.A.W.?Just Cannot Score,Sure Bring Plays..Il Just Drop More
Bill Only Has One Written That Hes EVER Got Props For! (Its True)
Man Wack Really Fits You Cunts,If You Left Im Sure We'd Miss You Tons?(Not)
And Bill Try And Talk Shit..Check The History Ive Already Ripped You Once!
S.A.W. You're Falling Back!Id Throw One Punch And Watch You All Collapse
Okay Rell's Been Teaching Arv?But They Still Call Him Wack! (That Means You To Rell)
Honestly S.A.W...Are You Delerious?Dissing Us You CANNOT Be Serious
Im Feared And Pissed,If I Were You..Id Just Stay Clear From This

Yeah Magic..R.I.P. Em

No beef, jus' deathâ€¦ Look'â€¦

We empty ya bodies, release 10 from the shotty, till we Leave police chalking positions
I hear Saw talking bout â€œrell with tight lines and flowâ€

Arvincible · Post by **Arvincible** » Tue Sep 23, 2008 9:00 am

Mark stood out here imo the sawdust line was the best line here...

The diss was so-so, I mean just like the dress and duc3 concepts on our diss u guys used the same concepts on "bill" a lot...and most of the jay lines are played escept for the blue jay one idk if it stung tho lol..anyways dress ur verse was cool, but ur usual flow kinda fell off here because of all the pauses, its not bad but it didn't seem like ur style.. Haz ur bars are still choppy because ur textbars are long then short then long again, and some concepts aren't as hard hitting as they shud be cuz ur punch is in the middle of the rhymescheme.

Btw u guys spelled "elite" wrong. Lol 7.5/10 fellas

Idk if we're gonna take the time to hit back but well see...

Omega Bill · Post by **Omega Bill** » Tue Sep 23, 2008 9:11 am

This was a good diss guys.

I think Haz stood out the most, his verse flowed really well and had some good hard hittin punches in there. Everyone did a good job though.

8/10.

Cee4 · Post by **Cee4** » Tue Sep 23, 2008 9:23 am

The first half of Dress verse was good. Some dope punches in there. I wasnt really feelin the last couple of bars but it was a smooth solid verse with some nice punches.

Magik Mark had the best verse here by quite a bit. Again i wasnt feeling the last few bars. the third and 4th last lines never rhymed. But the rest was fire. Mark easily had the best punchlines of the 3.

Haz verse was up and down for me. He hit harder with the personals than than any creative punchlines. The "only know ekoms from being virals cuzin" line was dope. he had a few more like that. also had a few wack one like the "couldnt have a good punch defendin kids againt a bully"

DressToKill · Post by **DressToKill** » Tue Sep 23, 2008 10:10 am

Thanks for the feed guys..I wrote this verse after coming back from a period of inactivity thats probably why it doesnt seem like my norm..great job to Haz/Mark

precise · Post by **precise** » Tue Sep 23, 2008 11:44 am

this is sick, nice punches

my favorite lines:

Still Nobody Can See Saw..Hell We Left The Playground Ages Ago! <-- lmao thats dope

Cuz Il Leave Ya Looking Blue Jay Something Like A Baseball Fan! <-- nice as well

Me, Haz and D combine to make Saw,.. Dustâ€¦ like we taking turns cuttin' wood <-- haha nice

Like Smith And Wesley In My Movie i Got "Will-Ta-Snipe" Alpha Billaz-Hype.. <-- this ones sick, creative

overall it was well written n a good read, nice punches

Haz · Post by **Haz** » Tue Sep 23, 2008 9:38 pm

Thanks For The Feed.

Omega Bill · Post by **Omega Bill** » Wed Sep 24, 2008 4:19 am

Dont flat out hate in Scriptures.

It will keep being deleted if I find it.

complexity · Post by **complexity** » Thu Sep 25, 2008 11:18 am

I hate to leave horrible feedback, but I was impressed by this drop.

Dress2Kill was a great opening act.

A great collab.

Overall: 8.8/10.

MagicMark · Post by **MagicMark** » Sat Sep 27, 2008 1:21 am

thanks for the feed ya'll

D and H came tight.. props..

this jus' a lil' something lol..

DressToKill · Post by **DressToKill** » Thu Oct 02, 2008 8:10 pm

Yeah..lmao..thats how we do!

Ambiguous Realm · Post by **Ambiguous Realm** » Tue Oct 07, 2008 10:07 pm

good shit 8/10, i like that personal haz used i think now more people will actually KNOW that now tho, cuz i know plenty had no idea before haha, im not surprised that i wasn't mentioned much, not exactly part of saw, but i know its mainly a response to the collab i joined with them to diss rip, n e ways overall i liked it

Def-init · Post by **Def-init** » Wed Oct 08, 2008 11:01 am

That was pretty good from start to finish.

"Still Nobody Can See Saw..Hell We Left The Playground Ages Ago!"

"I Play With The Roughest Toys,You Faggots Stay Stuck Fucking Boys
I Got S.A.W. Looking Under The Weather..Like Starring Up At Flyod! "

These were my fav lines in the your post.

Keep up the good work!

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