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Post by J-Majikk »

i made the beat for this and recordded on mixcraft. tried mixin it myself. mg=ight feature another dude on the track let me know how u feelin bout it
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Post by Young K »

your flows vicious, keep that up, lyrics were adequate, and the beat was hot so it was a good overall track...
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Post by 8th »

This was pretty cool. Never heard your shit so didn't know what to expect.

the best was pretty cool. Different than alot of the shit I hear. The lyrics where pretty good, and your flow was decent. It just sounds like you need a bit more confidence on the mic, or mic presence. I think you had a decent level of emotion (for this track) it just seemed like you were spittin with full confidence, and i could kinda hear it in your voice.

Other than that, it was pretty tight. Maybe turn up the lyrics just a bit, cause at sometimes they were a little hard to hear.


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Post by Kurse »

Kinda had that ol' Crucial Conflict steez about it the way you sped the shit up. Voc's could've used coming up a bit, but it wasn't bad. Ur definately gettin better at ur tracks kid! Keep doin yo thang!!
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Post by Haz »

Nice Dawg..
you Elevatin..
Flow Was Deffo Spazztic Firs Few Bars..

I Like Da Beat Nigggah.. U Jus Needa Betta Equipment Homie..

Dis Shit hadda Coo Feel To it Though..

Keep It Goin Dawg
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Post by |.R.SON.aLL.| »

i Think This Track Was Good ..
Flow Was Crazy, Lol ..
Mos Deffo Was Feelin` That ..
Could Use Some Swagger to it ...
Beat Was Tight, Could Possibly Be Sumptin` i Could Listen to On Mah iPod ..
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.. it`s S.a.W Bitches ..
.. Niggas ain't Fuckin Wit Tha Team ..

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Post by Arvincible »

shit was dope. lol

u needa work on the swag tho..u sound like a little wimp in some parts..just to be honest..
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