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yo my mic is JurasSICK, murk ur ass-quick im a bad trip of acid
colors make u swurvy n colllasp in ya casket

im a bad trip of acid come lookin sad, n leave laughin
some of these MCs should'nt even be alive or aknowledged

but its time that I amplify, U 2 step aside your garbage
well yea ima panda and i ravage ya on an average

i need a challenge, so remember to proceed with caution
I smoke weed to promise, to never be a bitch

and if, its all in vain then shit...
u can put me in a dugeon for a setence of a hundred
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Post by |.R.SON.aLL.| »

This Was Okay i Guess ..
First Bar Was Best imo ..
But U Repeated Tha Same Shit in Tha Second Bar ..
Wasn't Really Feelin That ..

Umm Simple 5 Bars ..
Keep Goin at it, Keep Droppin ..
Work On all Elements Fam ..
Punches, Multies, Complex Flows even ..
Get Wild Wit it ..
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

yeah the first bar was the only good thing in this piece, u need some work in all areas fam. ain no hate! u should try readin some of the vets drops on here it may help you out. but keep droppin tho
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Post by Khan »

it was ok, lol like these two said ^.^ keep working on it, and he right get wild with it fuck it just go nuts say what the fuck ever..i dont care if someone judges me, if the shit is funny to me ill say it...but dont listen to me...do what the fuck you wanna do.
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Post by Haz »

This was alright
The first bar was the best one..

keep Doin you
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yeah it was alright
keep goin you'll get better
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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uhh coo
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Post by Cee4 »

not feelin this here. the first was OK at best. the rest was nah
the flow was decent. you should work on uppin the creativity coz the punches didnt hit at all to me.

im not hating here. keep at it and you`ll improve
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