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~Symbolikull~
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

u know the desire is nice, but i fight fire wit ice,
souls gotta diar device, still growin i admire advice,
due, givin in time, i dont write i listen to rhymes,
witta premonitional mind, love hate! the competition is I,
its the fuel in the tank, no rank, ima shoe-in the game,
never lose wit u in my aim, eat all theres no food in the chain,


got bored
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Post by MagicMark »

lol - multis okay - nothing stand out - your flows your selling point

drop longer piece obv lol, keep dropping, its obvious people liking your style..
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