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Lawgix - Trapped
Posted: Tue Sep 09, 2008 7:20 am
by Lawgix
this is a song i wrote... describing some of the fake ass fucks on this site i was on... not Hip Hop related... but if ya want the story the song will describe it to ya... if ya still don't get it... hit me up
Posted: Tue Sep 09, 2008 7:36 am
by ~Symbolikull~
this shit is dope right here homie!!!!!!!! beat is fuckin ill, the hook is tight, ur flow was on point, emotion was astoundin lol lyrics were right on point. this was the dopest thing you have ever dropped, hands down!!!!!!!!!
Posted: Tue Sep 09, 2008 7:39 am
by Lawgix
haha thanx homie... good lookin out... lookin for some more feed
Posted: Tue Sep 09, 2008 12:18 pm
by Kurse
Yea, definately ur best track yet, hook and shit was bananas. Fell slightly off on a couple of parts, but it was very slight and not often. Good shit mayne...way 2 wipe ur dick on them fubar fucks! haha
Posted: Tue Sep 09, 2008 12:24 pm
by Lawgix
fucka fubar... thanx for the comments keep em comin!!!!
Posted: Tue Sep 09, 2008 12:37 pm
by Haz
This Shit was Tight My Niggah!!!
The Hoook Was Tight as Hell.. Was Dat a Young buck Sampe Wid da "Ayyy"??
Flow Was coo My dood.. Prescense Was nice.. u Shuld Adlib Jus to Increase
ya Prescense..
But son.. Dis shit Was Nice for a Comeback My Dood.
Keep Droppin Aiight..
Da Begginin Was Deffo Da Tightness
Posted: Tue Sep 09, 2008 1:09 pm
by Lawgix
thanx man appreciate it... i didn't sample nething from Buck... but that would be cool... but thanx for the feed bro... keep it comin!!!
Posted: Tue Sep 09, 2008 1:14 pm
by Haz
Na everytime it goes "ayyyyyyy" sounds jus like him
anyways Fam keep Droppin!!!
Posted: Tue Sep 09, 2008 1:19 pm
by Lawgix
ur prolly hearin KA cause its a KA beat... and it was tagged...
Posted: Sat Sep 13, 2008 2:09 am
by HKX
nice track dawg re-vise ur shit b4 u lay it down so u won't fall off on sum parts shit was good tho keep droppin son
Posted: Sat Sep 13, 2008 3:06 pm
by Lawgix
thanx man.. appreciate the feed homie
J.Lace?
Posted: Sun Sep 14, 2008 9:57 am
by Miilz
You Sound Like A Rapper Name "J Lace"??
Anyways This Track Better Then i Expected
You Stayed On Flow, The Storyline Was ill
And You Put The Emotions in Your Voice Good.
You Kinda Reminded Me Of Eminem When You Got On
How You Recorded This Track But Anyways
id Rate This 7/10
Posted: Sun Sep 14, 2008 11:15 am
by Lawgix
thanx for the feed guys... n wtf is J Lace???
Posted: Tue Sep 16, 2008 9:47 pm
by B-Bear
Damn..
Impressive, there were a few parts where u fell off tho... should let Viral mix it for u, cause that's the only downside to the track IMO
Flow is pretty much on point, concept is good .. lyrics are very good, structure is good and consistent.. feels like a heavyweighter!
Posted: Wed Oct 22, 2008 6:43 am
by precise
shit was nice, i liked the lyrics, ya stayed on topic with ur story n kept a pretty decent rhymescheme through it, hook was sick also, havent listened to one of ur tracks in ages but uve elevated alot man