Lawgix - Trapped

Lawgix · Post by **Lawgix** » Tue Sep 09, 2008 7:20 am

this is a song i wrote... describing some of the fake ass fucks on this site i was on... not Hip Hop related... but if ya want the story the song will describe it to ya... if ya still don't get it... hit me up

~Symbolikull~ · Post by **~Symbolikull~** » Tue Sep 09, 2008 7:36 am

this shit is dope right here homie!!!!!!!! beat is fuckin ill, the hook is tight, ur flow was on point, emotion was astoundin lol lyrics were right on point. this was the dopest thing you have ever dropped, hands down!!!!!!!!!

Lawgix · Post by **Lawgix** » Tue Sep 09, 2008 7:39 am

haha thanx homie... good lookin out... lookin for some more feed

Kurse · Post by **Kurse** » Tue Sep 09, 2008 12:18 pm

Yea, definately ur best track yet, hook and shit was bananas. Fell slightly off on a couple of parts, but it was very slight and not often. Good shit mayne...way 2 wipe ur dick on them fubar fucks! haha

Lawgix · Post by **Lawgix** » Tue Sep 09, 2008 12:24 pm

fucka fubar... thanx for the comments keep em comin!!!!

Haz · Post by **Haz** » Tue Sep 09, 2008 12:37 pm

This Shit was Tight My Niggah!!!
The Hoook Was Tight as Hell.. Was Dat a Young buck Sampe Wid da "Ayyy"??
Flow Was coo My dood.. Prescense Was nice.. u Shuld Adlib Jus to Increase
ya Prescense..
But son.. Dis shit Was Nice for a Comeback My Dood.
Keep Droppin Aiight..

Da Begginin Was Deffo Da Tightness

Lawgix · Post by **Lawgix** » Tue Sep 09, 2008 1:09 pm

thanx man appreciate it... i didn't sample nething from Buck... but that would be cool... but thanx for the feed bro... keep it comin!!!

Haz · Post by **Haz** » Tue Sep 09, 2008 1:14 pm

Na everytime it goes "ayyyyyyy" sounds jus like him
anyways Fam keep Droppin!!!

Lawgix · Post by **Lawgix** » Tue Sep 09, 2008 1:19 pm

ur prolly hearin KA cause its a KA beat... and it was tagged...

HKX · Post by **HKX** » Sat Sep 13, 2008 2:09 am

nice track dawg re-vise ur shit b4 u lay it down so u won't fall off on sum parts shit was good tho keep droppin son

Lawgix · Post by **Lawgix** » Sat Sep 13, 2008 3:06 pm

thanx man.. appreciate the feed homie

Miilz · Post by **Miilz** » Sun Sep 14, 2008 9:57 am

You Sound Like A Rapper Name "J Lace"??
Anyways This Track Better Then i Expected
You Stayed On Flow, The Storyline Was ill
And You Put The Emotions in Your Voice Good.
You Kinda Reminded Me Of Eminem When You Got On
How You Recorded This Track But Anyways
id Rate This 7/10

Lawgix · Post by **Lawgix** » Sun Sep 14, 2008 11:15 am

thanx for the feed guys... n wtf is J Lace???

B-Bear · Post by **B-Bear** » Tue Sep 16, 2008 9:47 pm

Damn..

Impressive, there were a few parts where u fell off tho... should let Viral mix it for u, cause that's the only downside to the track IMO

Flow is pretty much on point, concept is good .. lyrics are very good, structure is good and consistent.. feels like a heavyweighter!

precise · Post by **precise** » Wed Oct 22, 2008 6:43 am

shit was nice, i liked the lyrics, ya stayed on topic with ur story n kept a pretty decent rhymescheme through it, hook was sick also, havent listened to one of ur tracks in ages but uve elevated alot man

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