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J-Majikk
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Post by J-Majikk »

ok i had LOTS of trouble makin this track (and it is noticable) i made the beat. and it has a shit load of bass in it so turn ur headfones up my dude. theres only one verse kuzz i wanted it to be a collabo. so if u diggin it get at me. and do it soon kuzz i asked Kurse first so if he decicdeds 2 take up on the offer he got it please dont leave this page without commenting
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i'll leave u feed l8tr i'm downloadin 8th's shit at the moment thats takin years already i dont wanna slow it anymore but I'LL BE BACK ha ha lol
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

this wasn't as bad as i expected honestly.. quality could be better of course, the concept was pretty nice, nothin i would exactly jump on cuz i got a certain type of liking for my beats lol but yea this wasn't too bad
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Post by Viral »

im kinda feelin dat intro...sometimes it felt like the repeatin was off a bit..but regardless...quality is a big issue wit dis one...but the verse n wat not was coo...alot better than i expected...keep it up man...if u need any mixin help get at me
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