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Ay Dont Diss Plz I Am Still In The Process Of Elevating'
Just Releasing Some Shit Offa My Chest..

To Tell The Truth Its My Baby That I Crave..
Get Knocked Off By The Way That She Behaved..
Like Wayne, "I-Feel-Like-Dying",Where Is The Slumber..
What Am I To Her,Just Another Number..
So Much For The Fuckin Equation,Theres "Another Guy"..
What To Do,Maybe Threat,Yeah,He Is "Gonna Die"..
Maybe Forget Her,Listened To Timberland,Realised It Was Too Late,To Appologize..
But Baby Should Behave,i Think This Worth Another Try..
Like Other Hoes Why She Tryin 2 Be A Playa,When U Aint Got No Game..
She Aint Realised She Wid The Wrong Lame..
Well After You Ppl Read The Song..
Plz Help Me See Why The Fuck Did She Lead Me On'..



Sorry..Flow Was Choppy..(Equation: Mitty+Emma=Forver) She Made That =[

Anyway..
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well sum of the flow was choppy it was aiight
it was a slightly good read fo ya first drop
ya alright a bit like me when i started here a couple months ago
or 3 months anyway
hope ya elevate quickly
keep'em comin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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Post by кℓαѕѕιιcк »

Thanx Mayne'..I Aint Been On For Ages..Didnt Really Concentrate On The Whole Emcee Dream/Passion..(you Know School And Shit)

So Yeah..Thx For Da Feed Homie'

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Post by |.R.SON.aLL.| »

This Was a Koo Drop Fam ..
Tha Flow Mos Deffo Chopped Up at Times ..
Like Tha Timb Line ..
Lil Extended ..
But i`m Pretty Sure This a Koo Audio Tho ..
I Liked How You Wrapped it Up ..
Get a Little More in-depth With Tha Reader Tho Fam ...
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Post by Tu Crucial »

Nice Read you like one of the few who still rap with emotions and your flow was chopped but who cares im pretty sure you rapped it to silence so dont worry about it
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