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Posted: Sat Feb 10, 2007 5:06 am
by fuck haters
you holdin it down for da sams my nigga keep it up!
Posted: Sun Feb 11, 2007 6:53 am
by precise
not bad at all, theres things being linked with dashes that shouldnt be linked but alot of people seem to do that, youre good with topics, all the sams seem to be for some reason lol you got good content
My talent is precious, It's summin you'll never be possesin, I hope you're wearing armored-protection, Cause these bars is pefection/
fave line ^^^ and you got the multis goin in there
Posted: Sun Feb 11, 2007 3:36 pm
by Stina
i will admit it is scattered a bit, but i like the style of ya rhymin keep it up, its iight so far.
Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2007 5:26 am
by ~*Blitz*~
thanx for the feed back people, tis appreciated and it lets me know what I need to focus on....soooo THANX!