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fuck haters
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you holdin it down for da sams my nigga keep it up!
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Post by precise »

not bad at all, theres things being linked with dashes that shouldnt be linked but alot of people seem to do that, youre good with topics, all the sams seem to be for some reason lol you got good content

My talent is precious, It's summin you'll never be possesin, I hope you're wearing armored-protection, Cause these bars is pefection/

fave line ^^^ and you got the multis goin in there
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facin me? its mission impossible, like pickin up lesbian broads
fuck all these thespian frauds, they "bug me" like espionage
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Post by Stina »

i will admit it is scattered a bit, but i like the style of ya rhymin keep it up, its iight so far.
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thanx for the feed back people, tis appreciated and it lets me know what I need to focus on....soooo THANX!
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