Hip Hop Forum

First Ms.Rippa, I aint KATHY LEE so TAKE A SEAT, n DON’T SPEAK like silent AUCTIONS/
TALK SHIT, My math skills aint FLAWLESS… But how you 13-0.. with 2 LOSSES?//1

Decent opener. Nice personal.

Crossed Abs like Rips was ARAYAN YO, box voices til ya LARYNX BLOW/
EXPERIENCE SHOWS, Jack COULDN’T FLOW if next to a ‘RIPPArian ZONE” //

Prolly my favorite bar. Maybe to complex for some but I understand it.

GOT BEEF? Well SOMETHIN STINKS.. Must be all that bullshit JACK LINKS!! Im not FINISHED!/
This win is a GIVEN, given the fact the REAL JACK the Rippa…only preyed on WOMEN//3

Kind of played. Really the only personal I've seen against my name.

As a MATTER OF FACT, Hes the ADAM SANDLER OF RAP, All jokes, but can’t SERIOUSLY ACT/
Ya CAREER DISSAPPEAR in a FLASH! N Its clear he a FAG.. How all the kids be throwin they MARBLES AT JACK!!//4

Kind of got lost here. Don't really understand. You had multies going and then the second set kind of killed it so the vibe went south.

This LITERARY HACK is LITERALLY WHACK, open his MOUTH and Ill jack Jacks Jacket Crown!/
AYE YALL Laugh Out Loud, I JUST FOUND the hill that Jack STUMBLED DOWN! //5

Not feelin' this. Multi at the beginning almost sounds the same and I even read it twice which made me lose interest. Then the punch wasn't that hard. I like the concept but it could of been flipped a lil better.

http://www.pridedepot.com/?p=1588

An OMNIVORE bout to eat this OMISH-WHORE, aint even RIPPA PUSSY they day you was BORN/
Do like ends of PORN, GET OFF!! You PERFORM??? Nigga just give me the ORDER FORM for my BODYBOARD!//6

First line, punch is supa played. Then the fist second of the second line is played too. I did like the line but overall, wasn't that strong of a closer

OVERALL
I'd say you started pretty strong. You had nice multies, punches, you were creative with your personals and then it kind of fell off. I think if you would have kept up the same intensity throughout the whole verse, it would of been pretty consistant.

& to explain the difference in my win / loss record in my sig and profile is I don't count no shows.

Either way...Good battle

PCE

I've been to a lot of sites and the only reason Jack wouldn't stand out on any of them is because the dickriding would be so tremendous that he'd get punked for even dropping a verse like that. Then again, its always the same response after anyone loses, isn't it? After writing for many years, some of us find text battles tedious too. With that weak of verse, honestly, I wouldn't be making any statements.

I can think of at least 20 people off the top of my head that could beat you in a battle. Actually, basically half the logins today.

Throw marbles at jack? I hope that isn't suppose to be some sort of backwards ass wordplay.

haha. I don't think I have a rep. I'm pretty new myself. Either way, good battle man.

yeah jack, good battle. Lets run it back in months time and see what we come out with..

Word. I consider Jack a newb.

I appreciate the fact that you are actually defending your stance without just going into a tirade that makes no sense. I figured that I was a bit harsh.

I'll put it this way though. Even if I agree with the fact that some of the battlers aren't as strong as the others that doesn't entail you the right to slam the whole site. Furthermore, I don't know who either of you are besides reading a couple battle verses, and before this battle, you two had a combined record of 18-0. That has to say something positive about this site.

If you want to respond one more time. Go for it. Then this topic is getting closed.

-- Fri Jun 11, 2010 10:55 pm --

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