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Make you Proud.

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complexity
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Post by complexity »

Nice track. When you get your rhyme scheme perfected, you're going to be a complete beast with songs like this.

"it took a HARD-MIN-UTE but now i put my HEART-IN-IT
I speak truths IN-FIN-ITE SPIT-IT-WITH no GIM-MICKS
and for all them HATERS and them CRIT-ICS that dont GET-IT
this song was written to thank my momma thats why i DID-IT"

The substance was real heavy. I still think that my favorite part was the chorus, it was real catchy.

Good job.
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TreTru
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Re: Make you Proud.

Post by TreTru »

@Sol..thanks alot B!!..it's been a minute since we saw you round here..

@Plex..Thnx cant believe you dropped me some feed...haha..much appre..homey..1

Keep em comin..
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the flow was dope and so was the first verse.
out of 10 i would say 9.5/10
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Post by kennedycurse »

the beat caught me right away (i have to get better at beat making) and you've got this chill flow. Very chilled out track. I've listened to it a couple times so it's definitely good. I'll have to read the lyrics soon
blaze to this...
http://thisworldisntimportanttome.blogspot.com/
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