Nice track. When you get your rhyme scheme perfected, you're going to be a complete beast with songs like this.
"it took a HARD-MIN-UTE but now i put my HEART-IN-IT
I speak truths IN-FIN-ITE SPIT-IT-WITH no GIM-MICKS
and for all them HATERS and them CRIT-ICS that dont GET-IT
this song was written to thank my momma thats why i DID-IT"
The substance was real heavy. I still think that my favorite part was the chorus, it was real catchy.
Good job.
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Re: Make you Proud.
the flow was dope and so was the first verse.
out of 10 i would say 9.5/10
out of 10 i would say 9.5/10
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Re: Make you Proud.
the beat caught me right away (i have to get better at beat making) and you've got this chill flow. Very chilled out track. I've listened to it a couple times so it's definitely good. I'll have to read the lyrics soon
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