Following The Trend .

Brah-Vo · Post by **Brah-Vo** » Sat Dec 13, 2008 2:49 pm

Quick Key speakin out against dudes who follow the trend coz they insecure.
I gotta admit im guilty myself, though...

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Keffiyehs wrapped around they necks
Semi tight jeans with the newest high tops
Trade the gold in for a beeping pager
Still keepin major but they dont buy rocks
Coz jewels went outta fashion just last summer
And Lambos aint cool so buy a die cast hummer
Coz you just gotta ride your bike to class
plus you fight with brass knuckles on your fingers
Cop a AutoTune and call yourself a singer?

Damn

Lemme tell you something...

The trend is you shouldn't offend it
Judge you on your looks and how expensive
you look
free fashion advice thats should not be offensive
But the one being criticised gets all defensive
The definition of fly is the label you wear
keeping up its just so strenuous
People sittin at the tables just stare
grinding their teeth, just so envious
How much cash did you blow on them sneaks?
You hide your insecurity behind your clothes
Walking around tryna find them hoes
Flashy clothes so you wont show them you weak

Like that .

Brah-Vo · Post by **Brah-Vo** » Sat Dec 13, 2008 2:54 pm

upping.

Jesodist · Post by **Jesodist** » Sat Dec 13, 2008 3:00 pm

Keffiyehs wrapped around they necks
Semi tight jeans with the newest high tops
Trade the gold in for a beeping pager
Still keepin major but they dont buy rocks
Coz jewels went outta fashion just last summer
And Lambos aint cool so buy a die cast hummer
Coz you just gotta ride your bike to class
plus you fight with brass knuckles on your fingers
Cop a AutoTune and call yourself a singer

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I liked this verse kinds like talking about fashion you stayed on point bro nice. The flow was alright didnt see anything wrong with it just a lil scratch here and there but nothing major.

The trend is you shouldn't offend it
Judge you on your looks and how expensive
you look free fashion advice thats should not be offensive
But the one being criticised gets all defensive

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Nice lines right here sick flow. True words too was really feeling them.
The definition of fly is the label you wear
keeping up its just so strenuous
People sittin at the tables just stare

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Funny but true again well constructed nothing wrong with this.

grinding their teeth, just so envious
How much cash did you blow on them sneaks?
You hide your insecurity behind your clothes
Walking around tryna find them hoes
Flashy clothes so you wont show them you weak

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This was a bit off weak and sneaks were very far apart and the flow got a bit choppy here maybe you coulda inserted some more wordplay in the middle like a word that rhymes with weak and sneaks in the middle to keep the link of the flow going smooth.

All in all not a bad drop amigo.

Brah-Vo · Post by **Brah-Vo** » Sat Dec 13, 2008 3:02 pm

Thanks for the detailed feed my bro!

Glamtrash · Post by **Glamtrash** » Sat Dec 13, 2008 3:07 pm

All things considered, this was decent. I definitely liked it more than your last drop.

The trend is you shouldn't offend it
Judge you on your looks and how expensive
you look free fashion advice thats should not be offensive
But the one being criticised gets all defensive

^
This is the best bit imo.

Good shit kid.

Brah-Vo · Post by **Brah-Vo** » Sat Dec 13, 2008 3:11 pm

Good looks on the feed FL.

|.R.SON.aLL.| · Post by **|.R.SON.aLL.|** » Sat Dec 13, 2008 4:05 pm

This Was Decent Fam ..
Mos Deffo Not ya Best ..
But i Feel U On Tha Topic Tho ..
Cus alot Of Niggas Be Followin Tha Crowd ..

Overall Mah Favorite Part Has to Be ..

And Lambos aint cool so buy a die cast hummer
Coz you just gotta ride your bike to class
plus you fight with brass knuckles on your fingers

^^ Tha Flow Was Nice On How i Followed it in Mah Head ..

Judge you on your looks and how expensive
you look
free fashion advice thats should not be offensive
But the one being criticised gets all defensive

^^ .. This Was Pretty Koo Tho ..

Brah-Vo · Post by **Brah-Vo** » Sat Dec 13, 2008 4:24 pm

Good looks on the feed.
I agree that this wasnt my best.

Lotus · Post by **Lotus** » Sat Dec 13, 2008 6:17 pm

shit man, nice topic, well played too.

mad people are shallow, but i guess thas jus in our nature at the same time...

people think they dress a certain way, they can be that way...

like coppin a jersey sayin u play for the team..

Coz jewels went outta fashion just last summer
And Lambos aint cool so buy a die cast hummer
Coz you just gotta ride your bike to class
plus you fight with brass knuckles on your fingers
Cop a AutoTune and call yourself a singer?

lol... good shit. i like how you say die cast hummer.. its kinda a play on materialism, reducin shit to mere toys, due to the fact that noone really needs all the shit..

the entire second verse is on point wit crazy flow. i like your rhyme scheme..

The definition of fly is the label you wear
keeping up its just so strenuous
People sittin at the tables just stare
grinding their teeth, just so envious

i like how you got 2 rhymes goin at the same time, worked out rele well.

How much cash did you blow on them sneaks?
You hide your insecurity behind your clothes
Walking around tryna find them hoes
Flashy clothes so you wont show them you weak.

awesome way to end it, finishin the rhyme 3 lines l8er... takes a rele nice flow and energy on the track to pull it off though. reminds me a little bit of eminems style.

Brah-Vo · Post by **Brah-Vo** » Sat Dec 13, 2008 6:42 pm

Yo props on the feed man! You deffo got the message about the die cast metal hummer. Props for that .
Good looks on the feed.

Lotus · Post by **Lotus** » Sat Dec 13, 2008 6:51 pm

np man. check my drop out, first one on this site

EvilJoey · Post by **EvilJoey** » Sat Dec 13, 2008 9:58 pm

Nice little post

Over all good flow.. easy to follow
stayed with the Topic fine..

And Lambos aint cool so buy a die cast hummer

was best lines

but i liked ur last 4 lines alot as well.

THx for feed on mine too!

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