Jesodist

[Jesodist]

It's not about loosing it's about accepting defeat,
It's not about where you reached it's about the goal you truly seek,
It's not about your strength it's about finding out in what you're weak.
It's not about what message you learned and preached,
It's about what or whom you managed to really teach,
It's not about what you heard it's about how you speak.
It's not about what you found it's about you did with it,
It's not about where you went it's about where you've reached,
Its not about what you've done it's about what you achieved,
It's not about what you found it's about what you revealed,
Its not about how they died it's about how they lived.
It's not about why you harmed it's about how you felt,
It's not about how you won it's about how you dealt,
It's not about speed it's about stealth.
It's not about rich it's about wealth,
Its not about where you were born it's about where you died,
Its not about when you were born it's about when you will die,
It's not about the journey it's about the ride.
It's not about sinning it's about why,
It's not about your smile it's about why you cry.
It's not about offense it's about defense,
It's not about the past it's about present tense,
It's not about dollars it's about cents,
It's not about horror it's about suspense,
It's not about player it's about the game,
It's not about the hit it's about how you aim,
It's not about the wetness it's about the rain,
It's not about the link it's about the chain,
It's not about how you think it's about the brain,
It's not about the scars it's about the pain,
It's not about the cash it's about the fame,
It's not about the structure it's about the frame.
It's not about the building it's about the construction,
It's not about the mess it's about destruction,
It's not about the ground it's about the erosion.
It's not about the potion it's about the ingredients,
It's not about the rule it's about obedience,
It's not about the lesson it's about the experience.
It's not about the war it's about the reason,
It's not about the trust it's about the treason,
It's not about the weather it's about the season.
It's not about the drug it's about chemicals,
It's not about the hospitals it's about the type of medicals.
It's not about the ratio it's about the decimals.
It's not about the crime scene it's about the criminals,
It's not about the sea it's about the waves,
It's not about where you are it's about reaching the graves.
It's not about the levels it's about the stage,
It's not about the book's name it's about content written on the page.

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[TreTru]

I like alot of it ..
theres a couple sketchy parts..but it's a pretty
dope concept..I'm into that kinda shit..
the rhymless parts mainly I wasn't feelin..technically, the damn things
so long you could cut most of those out if you wanted..
of course keep droppin..

I take that back I re-read it and there was only one spot that was kinda sketchy, minor...good post.

[Jesodist]

hm well i was really bored when i did that long verse its not rap so some words might sound forced.
Thanks for checking this out bro