Money Kills (Edited)

Dead Silence · Post by **Dead Silence** » Sun Dec 07, 2008 5:28 pm

Edited this better
Dont know what the fuck happened before
just got sloppy with it
dk

would any votes changed if i would have done something like this?

Dead Silence · Post by **Dead Silence** » Mon Dec 08, 2008 3:11 pm

nothing?
k thats kool

HKX · Post by **HKX** » Tue Dec 09, 2008 6:03 am

sounds better son but u slacked lol

Glamtrash · Post by **Glamtrash** » Tue Dec 09, 2008 6:28 am

I didn't even listen to this first one, and if it's worse than this, I really don't want to. Dude, I can't even understand what the fuck you're saying for most of it. You can do a lot better than this.

Dead Silence · Post by **Dead Silence** » Tue Dec 09, 2008 8:08 am

HKX
i didnt re-record it or nething

FL
yeah the other one was worse
my vocals were too low
i just raised them and added like a reverb on the parts where the homeless guys says shit if anyone didnt notice

Lawgix · Post by **Lawgix** » Tue Dec 09, 2008 1:12 pm

Double.FL wrote:I didn't even listen to this first one, and if it's worse than this, I really don't want to. Dude, I can't even understand what the fuck you're saying for most of it. You can do a lot better than this.

hey u really ARE a chick haha

Glamtrash · Post by **Glamtrash** » Tue Dec 09, 2008 1:44 pm

That's right kids, no more discrepancies. Everybody thank Kurse.

Lawgix · Post by **Lawgix** » Tue Dec 09, 2008 2:07 pm

hey atleast my screen didn't crack or nething ya know? haha

Glamtrash · Post by **Glamtrash** » Tue Dec 09, 2008 2:13 pm

Damnit! Well I tried right? haha.

TreTru · Post by **TreTru** » Fri Dec 12, 2008 7:33 pm

uh yeah i kinda liked the beat..that's about it you sound scared or something.
but you'r young I'm sure so you got that on your side..keep grindin..

- Mutual - · Post by **- Mutual -** » Sat Dec 13, 2008 4:59 am

beat was dope but not really feelin anythin else
i've heard songs where ya tried to be more like Lil wayne
but this one u didnt but it was better

Viral · Post by **Viral** » Sat Dec 13, 2008 5:25 am

dis couldve been alot better if ur vocals were clearer...its hard to understand alotta shit u say...over all..it was decent...i dont kno y u dont send me ur shit for me to mix up so it sounds better...but its straight...keep doin u

Dead Silence · Post by **Dead Silence** » Sat Dec 13, 2008 5:59 am

thanks guys

Lawgix · Post by **Lawgix** » Sun Dec 14, 2008 2:21 pm

Double.FL wrote:Damnit! Well I tried right? haha.

could have tried harder u know??? slacker

Miilz · Post by **Miilz** » Tue Dec 16, 2008 8:58 pm

Damn u Sound So Young ..Lol But it's All Good Though Son.
Glad u Turned Up The Vocals ..The Beat Was Nice
But Yeah, u Sound Like u Rushin ur Verse Before Somebody
Walk in? The Lyrics Weren't Bad, Not The Best
Either Though. But Dont Get Me Wrong, i'm Not That
Good As i Am At Battling, As i Am At Topicals So i Needa Work
On That To. But You Needa Also Work On ya Delivery, And Rap a Lil
Louder, Make Sure Ya Vocals Stays The Same Throughout The Recordin.
Don't Scream To Loud Though, You'll Feel it, Beleive Me Just Rap To a Certain
Level. Keep On Practicing, And Posting, it's Good That You're Trying And Getting
More Active in The Audios. The Beats u Rap On Are Nice, Just Needa Work With
Them Better. if You Have To Battle Someone, To Get u To Try Harder, Keep On Doing It, Losing Or Not, it Will Come To u. Good Luck With Ya Rap Career ..

Money Kills (Edited)

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