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ScottJames
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Post by ScottJames »

yeah ^^

thanks fam...
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Post by +InFLuenCe+ »

yeah a couple of lines was played but overall it was nice
keep it up ya digg
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Post by Cee4 »

Yeah this wa pretty dope. a lot of ill punches and u stayed consisent through a long ass verse lol. there was a couple that were a bit off and i would of left out.. david blaine, medicine bottle but on the whole this was good. best punchline drop ive seen in a while


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Post by Viral »

this was a dope piece..i liked it..kept my attention the whole way thru...n usually my attention span lasts 20 seconds if that...some shit ive heard before...worded in different ways..but that doesnt really matter..just as long as u didnt bite it...lol..but like i said..it was a dope piece...keep doin ya thing man..id like to see more drops from ya
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Post by ScottJames »

^i dont bite
thanks for the feed though fam...
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Ekmos - KO ... Duc3 - KO ... Jesodist - KO ... MagicMark - KO ... Animul_Instinkz - KO ... Old Rotten - KO ... Dr Kevorkian - KO ... Ambition - KO ... Eclipse - KO ... Domino - 5-3 ... Crimson - KO ... MC Scars - KO ... Modern Defiance - KO ... Tempest - KO ... QwarterZ - KO ... TreTru - KO ... Quix - KO ... Grim/Leeroi Green - KO ... Knowmad - KO ... Cre@tiv3 - KO ... MVario - TKO ... Hazard - KO ... ER - KO ... Colossus - KO ... FlipSide - KO ... JackDaRippa - KO ... JSteel - KO ... Kau The Lion - KO ... 32Neilz - KO ... Evolution - TKO ... Shazo - KO ... CBK - KO
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Cee4 - 5-3
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31-1
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Post by siniztac-51 »

damn..madd props Scott...you got some nice, fresh punchlines...diggin the shortbar style...flow was on point...multis nailed it...

about a 9.5/10
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Re: I'm Outstanding Like Homeless People...Read Why...

Post by ScottJames »

winning.
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WINS:
Ekmos - KO ... Duc3 - KO ... Jesodist - KO ... MagicMark - KO ... Animul_Instinkz - KO ... Old Rotten - KO ... Dr Kevorkian - KO ... Ambition - KO ... Eclipse - KO ... Domino - 5-3 ... Crimson - KO ... MC Scars - KO ... Modern Defiance - KO ... Tempest - KO ... QwarterZ - KO ... TreTru - KO ... Quix - KO ... Grim/Leeroi Green - KO ... Knowmad - KO ... Cre@tiv3 - KO ... MVario - TKO ... Hazard - KO ... ER - KO ... Colossus - KO ... FlipSide - KO ... JackDaRippa - KO ... JSteel - KO ... Kau The Lion - KO ... 32Neilz - KO ... Evolution - TKO ... Shazo - KO ... CBK - KO
LOSSES:
Cee4 - 5-3
OVERALL:
31-1
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