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VERY DISRUPTIVE

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MEDICAL ATTENTION-

like an urban-disease i brought verb-from-the-feet(defeat), so disturbin-the-peace is the word-on-the-street, my thoughts merge-in-the-deep as my verse-then-repeats, i put the surgeon-to-sleep with the nurse-in-the-sheets, stealing their soul like lynches-in-theft, gasping for life as their lungs clinches-on-breath, while they're infected by syringes-n-meth they lay injected at inches-from-death....

CHILD "LABOR" LAWS-

a painful murder as i strike my fist-in-ur-mind-some-more, then pierce thru ur neck n start twistin-ya-spinal-chord, tangling ur intestines till u starve-thru-a-nest ,shovin shards-to-ya-breast as they carve-thru-ya-chest...
.....this is a HUGE THREAT so try-holdin-ya-kids, cuz my main objective is to pry-open-ya-ribs!



eh.. second verse is the consequence for birth..relates to the title i gave it if ur creative enough to understand...
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Yah. I was creative enough. It was pretty good.
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nice

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good job man, the ad for guests is hilarious on this.
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lmao wtf.. i didn't do that but yea its funny..
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hahah I was wondering what you were talking about because I logged out and it was just the same.
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Yah. The ad comes with the content in the post. And you talked about disease, Lmao
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Hahaha, nice one admin...
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