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Post by drunken jesus »

still better than half the shit in the forum though lol
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
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Post by Mac »

Word, Good Shit.

I Think Folks Had A Hard Time The Way It Was Posted The First Time. Like the Lay Out Of Your Bars. The Second Post Of The Verse Was Just Easier To Read. I Like The Uniqeness, Shits Dope..Good Shit Man.
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

yeah i read this shit awhile back, i jus must not of posted on it, that first line was pretty funny, but you know this was ill, so it is what it is homie
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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