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Who you kidding?
When it comes to flinging rhymes you're the definition
of wastage,
Quit faking
The lines you spiting are faded and nothing creative,
nothing effective, They're weaker than dying African
natives !
Tapping inside your thoughts bombing your spit,
Packing heat blasting automatic clips and mashing your
ribs.
re digging your carcass from the casket swinging
ratchets then closing the lid.
You dumb bitch
I patrol galaxies like and astronaut
Pick rappers up crack their tiny backs then split them
apart.
The only time you're scripts are considered sick is
when you mentioning dist (jesodist)
Clean my sperm that stick to your lip, I'm legit
prick,
Quit riding my dick its making me sick !
Don't fight my flow of fire with water because you will
evaporate
Evil deeds I am just here to spread hate
Collect skulls of these high emcees like trees I
decapitate
Smashing kids, swish earned a reputation blazing emcees
to ashes
Power slashes to your eye lashes
Blind it and Disappear it like gasses,
Your style is see through like glasses,
I can kill you by poisoning the planet.
i am the blood that streams through your anatomy
quit acting like thug when you are a nobody
I attack freezing the stems of the veins that carry
information to the rest of your body
aiming direct to your heart then blasting a shotty.
Drying the ink from your pen and burning you madly.
I am a cynical soul
Finger his mom to deliberately wrap the neck of the
fetus with his own umbilical cord
Just to watch him choke before he spits with his neck
broke.
I intercept your attacks before you plan them
Cut down your crops before you plant them
So your poor life will never grow old and pop a stem.
The dance floor where I break dance is hell
If you spit cold what the fuck are you doing here?!?!

What do you all think people ? One of more to come. if it aint sick tell me one time so i dont keep posting please. PEACE
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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

wasn't bad, think ur rhyme scheme could've been better, i wouldn't say its "sick" but it wasn't bad, think u should post more anyways
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hm
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Post by Glamtrash »

This is alright. You've got some potential. Keep droppin', I'd like to see more.
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They're weaker than dying African
natives !
haha funny shit..I liked this line..
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Post by - Mutual - »

that lines was dope
the flow and structure maybe coulda been better
but it was straight
the best lines or one of em was said above
so jus keep comin
ya gotta lot of potential
keep'em comin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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Post by TreTru »

shit is it an audio? cause if it is I cant seem to download it..
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Post by TreTru »

ay yo JES,
do you got a myspace or soundclik or anything?
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Post by Jesodist »

I got myspace yes i am working on it but my youtube is sick check my audios when you got a chance bro. Its spanish but any feed is still respected.

www.youtube.com/JESODIST
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