[font=Georgia]I'm Sure Most People Prolly Know What This Is
But, For The People Dat Don't Basically..
An A-Z Free/Keystyle Is Where You Start With A Letter[/font]
[font=Georgia]Example:A, And You Rhyme Starting With The Letter A
Like..[/font]
[font=Georgia]
Acoustic's Playing, Competition Slaying
Coke-Scales Weighing, Know What Im Saying?!?
Apathy An Artist, Powerful & Crazy
Some Mainstream Is Dead, Cuz Some Artists Are Lazy..[/font]
[font=Georgia]Datz How I Do Mines Anyways..
Datz Jus' A Prime Example Doe Nah Mean
But, Peep It Folks!
& Feel Free Ta Leave Feed & Your Thoughts On It..
[/font]
[align=center]A
[font=Georgia]Anatomy's A Lie Anybody Who Believes It Should Get A Reality Check
Or Drive They Car Into A Bridqe, Dats Riqht Nikka A Car Wreck
Anarchy Is Jus' A Cult, Some People Believe It Has Meaninq To It
If Datz Watchu Believe By All Means Pimp, Stick To It
[/font]
B
Blasphemy Beliefs, Reachinq Deep Under Tha Surface Beneath
Practice Watchu Preach, Reach Hiqher Then Alottah Otha People Can Reach
Betray And Get Heat, Death Before Dishonor, Tha Code Of Tha Streets
Bush Should Be Impeached, Speak Your Mind You Have Tha Freedom Of Speech
C
[font=Georgia]Catastrophic Bombs Wipinq 3rd World Countrys Of Their Existence
We're Goinq Into A Second Great Depression, But Nobody Listens
Clips Threateninq Tha Presidents Life, Most Of You Are Prolly Guessinq
24/7 Tha Gov. Taps All Your Phones, While Your Never Expectinq
[/font]
D
[font=Georgia]Democrats & Republicans, People Have Their Individual Opinion
Thinkin' About A Different President, But Nobodys Winninq
Demandinq Payments, Mothers & Fathers With Starvinq Children
While Thuqs Hustlas And Ganqstas Are Out Here Robbin' N' Killinq
[/font]
E
[font=Georgia]Economical Election, I Mean..Thats What We're Votinq For Riqht?
Seeinq Which Candidate Will Not Give Up Tha Freedom To Fiqht
Eliminatinq Enemies, But Only Causinq Money To Dissappear
Familys Of Iraq Soldiers Cryinq, But Nobody Hears They're Innocent Tears[/font]
F
[font=Georgia]Fuckin' Bush Look What He Made This Country Into
And If You Voted 4 Him, Im Sorry But....Fuck You
This Nation Is Suppose Ta Be Great, Pride In Tha Red White & Blue
Trustinq Tha Government, And You Think All That Shits True?
[/font]
G
[font=Georgia]Gulable Mind-State People Dnt Know What To Believe
Fillinq Your Head Up Wit Lies Due To Tha Media & Tv
Grindin' Day By Day Jus' To Feed Yuh Family, Everyone Has Ta Eat
Fiqhtinq For Your Life Becuz You Neva Kno When You'll Be 6 Feet Deep
[/font]
H
[font=Georgia]Heroic Firemen Savinq Tha Massacre Of Tha Twin Towers
Tha Press Irratatinq Stars & Celebritys, Media Showers..
Hieroqlyphics Started Out As An Ancient Lanquaqe
Then We Have Enqlish And Spanish, Combine 'Em And Its Spanqlish[/font]
I
[font=Georgia]In A World That's Filled With Lies, And You Wont Even Notice
Tha Bibles All Lies, I Mean Seriously..A Man Cant Be A Lotus..
Iqnorant People Scattered This World Like An Ant Family
Consequences Are Endless, But Some Can Be Deadly[/font]
J
[font=Georgia]Jokers, Mimes, & Maqicians..If You Think About It..It's All An Act
Crooked Cops & Government Officials, I Like To Call 'Em Rats..
Jealous Females Can Cause Damaqe, Believe It's A Fact
Marriqe Is Jus' Anotha Word Of Sayin' I Own You, Like A Contract[/font]
K
[font=Georgia]Ku Kux Klan Is Jus' Takinq Out They're Frustrations On Black People
But I Thouqht That In Dis Country Every Man Is Equal?
Kinderqarten Was Jus' A Start 2 Get Knowledqe, No Real Meaninq
And Whether You Like It Or Not..Workinq For Minimum Waqe Is Demeaninq[/font]
L
[font=Georgia]A Ladder Of Gov. But They're All The Same
Shows Like 20/20 & Dr. Phil Is Tha Kindah Shit That Floods Your Brain
Livinq In A Society Where Tha Media Is Tha Most Powerful Thinq
Rotatinq In A Circle Of Information, Like A Fuckin' Weddinq Rinq[/font]
M
[font=Georgia]Modify The World, I Think About What Would Happen
Hip Hop Is So Popular Now You'll Even See Lil Kids Rappin'
Meteroloqy Is Jus' Tha Weather Given, Think About It
You Could Care Less, But Your Conscience Can't Live Without It[/font]
N
[font=Georgia]Necrophiliacs Are So Sick And Sadistic Stuck In Their Lil World
Havin' Sex With Dead Bodys Of Elders, Even Lil Girls
Nails In A Coffin, Try Beinq Locked In One If You're Claustrophobic
Im Stretchinq Da Ability Of My Mind, Like Fitness Aerobics[/font]
O
[font=Georgia]Oncominq Traffic, It Always Seems Slower Than You Think
But 1 Car Will Hitchu Faster Then Even An Eye Can Blink
Oranqe Vests Flood Tha Scene Of Tha Accident
Trust Me I Kno, It Happened 2 My Ex She Was Killed In Tha Accident[/font]
P
[font=Georgia]Parks Filled With Children, Easy 2 Pick One Of 'Em Up
Why Do You Think Datz A Child Molestors Fav Spot 2 Kidnap 'Em And Tie 'Em Up
Plaqiarism Gets People In Alottah Trouble These Days
But If You Take A Paraqraph And Chanqe It Up Into Your Own Words Its Not Tha Same?[/font]
Q
[font=Georgia]Quest To Find Love And True Happyness, That's What Everybody Wants
Ta Find A Wife, Make Some Kids, And Let Her Make Yuh Lunch
Question? If You Never Found All This, And You Lived Alone
Would You Jus' Give Up, Or Jus' Become A Whore And Find People Ta Bone[/font]
R
[font=Georgia]Riqht Is Never Easy To Defend, No Matter What Anybody Says
People Goinq Mentally Insane Jus' Because They Didnt Take Their Meds
Relieve Tha Stress, "Ay Homie, Come E're N' Smoke This Blunt"
Peer Pressure Is A Bitch, But If Everybody Jumped Would You Jump?[/font]
S
[font=Georgia]Snakes In Disquise Some Good, And Some Bad
If Yo Loved One Or Siqnificant Other Got Taken Away, Would You Be Sad?
Sufferinq In A Cell, For A Crime You Didn't Commit
Would You Stare At Yuh Loved Ones Behind A Glass, Or Jus' Take Tha Razor, Give Up N' Quit?[/font]
T
[font=Georgia]Tyranny Is A Crime, And You Can Get Sentenced To Death
But If You Have No Family, No One Dat Cares, Is It Bettah To Settle Fa Less?
Tiqer Bit Tha Ladies Arm Off, I Wont Lie..I Lauqhed
Honestly You're That Stupid 2 Try N' Pet A Wild Animal..Intelliqence Is What You Lack[/font]
U
[font=Georgia]Unravel Your Thouqhts, And Push Yourself Towards Your Goal
Fuck Who Doubts You, You Can Do Watever You Want No Matter What You're Told
Undefined, Like Math Problems That Cannot Be Solved
If Your Not Willinq To Chanqe..Yuh Problems Cannot Be Solved[/font]
V
[font=Georgia]Ventriloquist Dolls Are A Form Of Creativity
But Its Dumb As Hell They Give 'Em Names Like Tiffany
Vandalism Isn't A Crime, It's A Way Of Art
If You Dnt Like It, Too Bad..Get A Chanqe Of Heart..[/font]
W
[font=Georgia]Ways To Show Someone You Love Them Are Endless
Get Heartbroken And Face It..Your Defenseless
Wantin' Ta Make Up For Your Mistakes, But Sometimes Its Too Late
So Your Emotions Build Up Inside Of You, Yep..Time Ta Hate..[/font]
X
[font=Georgia]X-Rayz Are Helpful, In All Kindah Ways
But Health Bills Are Expensive..I Guess Everybodys Gottah Pay
Xanax Pills Are Fa Curinq Pain
But People Jus' Take 'Em Ta Feel A Hiqh And Fuck Up Dey Brain..[/font]
Y
[font=Georgia]You Won't Know Anotha Persons Pain Until You Been In They're Shoes
Dnt Judqe People Be4 You Kno 'Em, Cuz Like Chess Games..You Cant Predict They're Moves
Ya See..Life Isn't Always Gonnah Brinq You Joy
Sometymes It'll Play Around With You Lyke A Toy[/font]
Z
[font=Georgia]Zero Effort, Please Believe It Gets You No Where..
But Jus' A Low-Paying Job Cleanin' Restraunt Tables & Chairs
Zip Yuh Feelinqs Up, And What'll You Find?
Nothin' But Fucked Up Emotions & Thouqhts Combined..[/font][/align]
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hm, not bad, some of the bars were alright, i like to do these differently, never posted one i dont think, least i dont remember, but the alphabet assassination i prefer more consistency and without making it so long
quick example...
arming arsenals to attack areas like aerial acrobatics,
bombing bars in brawls, basically bringing burials back to brackets
quick example...
arming arsenals to attack areas like aerial acrobatics,
bombing bars in brawls, basically bringing burials back to brackets

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i just felt like u defeated the purpose of an alphabetic drop, i can understand wat u did its just not wat i anticipated
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Ekoms what did you meant by this ?
Yung flow that was some clever and artistic way to put it down homie. Sometimes practicing new styles of writing like this boosts your creativity depending on the content and flows you put on it. It helps you to advance both lyrically and mentally and to inspire other writer's either vets or rookies on different ways to create or develop styles like these when they write. The more you practice ways to write raps the better you get and advance forward. Your flow was a bit choppy in some parts and some words you rhymed sounded a bit forced, but the message was understandable.
I was really feeling some parts of your verse more than the rest and could really relate to what message you were trying to get across.
Especially these lines which hit me the most:
'Catastrophic Bombs Wipinq 3rd World Countrys Of Their Existence
We're Goinq Into A Second Great Depression, But Nobody Listens'
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
I live in a third world
'People Have Their Individual Opinion'
^^^^^
True
'Gulable Mind-State People Dnt Know What To Believe
Fillinq Your Head Up Wit Lies Due To Tha Media & Tv
Grindin' Day By Day Jus' To Feed Yuh Family, Everyone Has Ta Eat
Fiqhtinq For Your Life Becuz You Neva Kno When You'll Be 6 Feet Deep'
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Lotta people get fooled by media and television and everyone has to eat can mean a lotta things like get paid get laid or feed of valuable information to live in better condition till their time in this earth is over.
'Jokers, Mimes, & Maqicians..If You Think About It..It's All An Act
Crooked Cops & Government Officials, I Like To Call 'Em Rats..
Jealous Females Can Cause Damaqe, Believe It's A Fact'
'Snakes In Disquise Some Good, And Some Bad Modify The World, I Think About What Would Happen Hip Hop Is So Popular Now You'll Even See Lil Kids Rappin'
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
snakes i took it like the people who surround you and cant be trusted because you never know their real intentions and how they think. Hip Hop is definately popular and everywhere lotta kids rapping.
'Plaqiarism Gets People In Alottah Trouble These Days
But If You Take A Paraqraph And Chanqe It Up Into Your Own Words Its Not Tha Same?'
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^6
Well i agree that plagiarism gets you in trouble but disagree when you said that by changing something it would be the same. I think that if you take an idea and change it by inculding some new ideas of your own to expand the message by inserting further ideas into it to go deeper into the topic, it would be like a collab or like a blend.
'Unravel Your Thouqhts, And Push Yourself Towards Your Goal
Fuck Who Doubts You, You Can Do Watever You Want No Matter What You're Told
Undefined, Like Math Problems That Cannot Be Solved
If Your Not Willinq To Chanqe..Yuh Problems Cannot Be Solved'
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
I like the way you compared the thoughts to a math problem. If you cannot solve the math equation give up and dont be willing to solve it, our problems
will not be solved.
Wantin' Ta Make Up For Your Mistakes, But Sometimes Its Too Late
So Your Emotions Build Up Inside Of You, Yep..Time Ta Hate'
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Its never too late to make up for your mistakes and emotions caused by that dont necessarily mean that hate will build up, on the countrary it can be a reason to keep you stronger.
'You Won't Know Anotha Persons Pain Until You Been In They're Shoes
Dnt Judqe People Be4 You Kno 'Em, Cuz Like Chess Games..You Cant Predict They're Moves
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
I agree with this because judging someone too early would be jumping to conclusions without analyzing the whole picture.
'Zero Effort, Please Believe It Gets You No Where..
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i agree with this too i've been through this many times..
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Ekoms what did you meant by this ?
Yung flow that was some clever and artistic way to put it down homie. Sometimes practicing new styles of writing like this boosts your creativity depending on the content and flows you put on it. It helps you to advance both lyrically and mentally and to inspire other writer's either vets or rookies on different ways to create or develop styles like these when they write. The more you practice ways to write raps the better you get and advance forward. Your flow was a bit choppy in some parts and some words you rhymed sounded a bit forced, but the message was understandable.
I was really feeling some parts of your verse more than the rest and could really relate to what message you were trying to get across.
Especially these lines which hit me the most:
'Catastrophic Bombs Wipinq 3rd World Countrys Of Their Existence
We're Goinq Into A Second Great Depression, But Nobody Listens'
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
I live in a third world
'People Have Their Individual Opinion'
^^^^^
True
'Gulable Mind-State People Dnt Know What To Believe
Fillinq Your Head Up Wit Lies Due To Tha Media & Tv
Grindin' Day By Day Jus' To Feed Yuh Family, Everyone Has Ta Eat
Fiqhtinq For Your Life Becuz You Neva Kno When You'll Be 6 Feet Deep'
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Lotta people get fooled by media and television and everyone has to eat can mean a lotta things like get paid get laid or feed of valuable information to live in better condition till their time in this earth is over.
'Jokers, Mimes, & Maqicians..If You Think About It..It's All An Act
Crooked Cops & Government Officials, I Like To Call 'Em Rats..
Jealous Females Can Cause Damaqe, Believe It's A Fact'
'Snakes In Disquise Some Good, And Some Bad Modify The World, I Think About What Would Happen Hip Hop Is So Popular Now You'll Even See Lil Kids Rappin'
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
snakes i took it like the people who surround you and cant be trusted because you never know their real intentions and how they think. Hip Hop is definately popular and everywhere lotta kids rapping.
'Plaqiarism Gets People In Alottah Trouble These Days
But If You Take A Paraqraph And Chanqe It Up Into Your Own Words Its Not Tha Same?'
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^6
Well i agree that plagiarism gets you in trouble but disagree when you said that by changing something it would be the same. I think that if you take an idea and change it by inculding some new ideas of your own to expand the message by inserting further ideas into it to go deeper into the topic, it would be like a collab or like a blend.
'Unravel Your Thouqhts, And Push Yourself Towards Your Goal
Fuck Who Doubts You, You Can Do Watever You Want No Matter What You're Told
Undefined, Like Math Problems That Cannot Be Solved
If Your Not Willinq To Chanqe..Yuh Problems Cannot Be Solved'
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
I like the way you compared the thoughts to a math problem. If you cannot solve the math equation give up and dont be willing to solve it, our problems
will not be solved.
Wantin' Ta Make Up For Your Mistakes, But Sometimes Its Too Late
So Your Emotions Build Up Inside Of You, Yep..Time Ta Hate'
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Its never too late to make up for your mistakes and emotions caused by that dont necessarily mean that hate will build up, on the countrary it can be a reason to keep you stronger.
'You Won't Know Anotha Persons Pain Until You Been In They're Shoes
Dnt Judqe People Be4 You Kno 'Em, Cuz Like Chess Games..You Cant Predict They're Moves
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
I agree with this because judging someone too early would be jumping to conclusions without analyzing the whole picture.
'Zero Effort, Please Believe It Gets You No Where..
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
i agree with this too i've been through this many times..
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by wat i said i meant i expected something similar to my example, something that had consistency with the alphabet and still had a message whether it was subliminally metaphoric or not, usually alphabet pieces r more complex, i just didn't see the difficulty in starting a sentence with the next letter in the alphabet and that's all, so as an alphabetic scripture i'd give it a 2/10, but as a scripture in general i'd give it a 5/10, it was decent, keep droppin

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