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He 'piss scared' of me, so he cant 'handle his bladder', in words, ill damage-his-tatters
cause the only time people associate "quix/and trouble" is dyin' in Granualar-Matter!!!(quicksand is made up of granular matter)

^^ The Line Was Ok, Not Bad Though

when the mighty-tech-spurts, you might-get-wrecked-first, i shoot on sight-and-deck-jerks
Im a menace!! n' in this battle, Its my job to "overshadow on Cuq/Q" like 'Stage Lightin'-Experts'

^^ Line Was Sick, The Flow Was a Lil Off, Second Line Needed a Multie But it Packed a Good Nameplay
Which Made The Bar Twice As Hard. it Was New And Creative.


Im 'buffy~in~a~freezer" im a "cool-slayer", "ruptured~all~your~knee's, as imknown for cruel-care
I'll make this fool-gayer.. So i get mad and "smash and break Q" like an "Angry Pool-Player"!!

^^ This Was Cool, i Think i Heard Something Similar To it, But it Wasn't As Hardhitting As The
Second Bar.


If you "see yaself winnin", ya havin' the "wrong-visions", cause i keep pumpin' out strong-writtens
Fuck ya whole rep.. the only time "Q's words worth hearin'" is when 'James' is going on 'Bond's' Missions!!!

^^^ This Was Sick, Not Something Everyone Would Think Of.

I come with complex shit, that'd trash up ya skin, then'd rip-ya-bandages
the fists'd-damage-ya, Watch as i take "U" out, to show that even Kids-can-handle-ya! - http://images.google.co.uk/images?hl=en ... a=N&tab=wi (WOW>...)

^^^ This Was Ok ..Wasn't Good But Wasn't Bad ..Basically u Should Of Took Away The First Line
The Rhyme Didnt Add On With The Second Line So yeah.


I 'scramble'-nerds n' 'egg'heads, my punches'll disjoint-ya-half-assed-verse
Cause the only time " 'QUIX', is of value with letters", is in points-for-scrabble-words!! (lmao)

^^ This Was Straight Also, Didn't Catch My Attention.


Overall You Needa Work On Ya Flow. You Needa Add More Multies
To Catch Ya Flow, The Bars is Kinda Stretched Out. u Have Killer
Nameplay, Which is Apart Of The Reason u Got Him. i'm a Word/Nameplay
Guy My Self, But Keep On Battlin, & Work On ya Multies You'll Get it.




You seem TIMID cuz you SNICHES ARE TRASH overrated Handme down emcees just a GIMMIK IN RAP
your IMAGE IS ASS Quix have yah in STICHES N CASTS when i 'Cut Magic' like Sawing BITCHES IN-HALF

^^^ Bar Was Straight, Probably Could Of Worded ya Last Line Better But it Was Straight Though.

your Incredibly Basic, your PORTRAYED AS LAME, WHY SPEAK HERB? i'd call him sugar, but this GUYS-SWEETER
I got DisGUISED HEATERZ! and only time 'Magic In-pressed' is thanks to DAVID BLAINS DRy-CLEANER

^^^ Line Was Ass ..No Hate, Just Think u Was Tryna Get The Bar Done. u Put. Ya Flow Was a Lil Off, But i Caught Back On in Second Line. Work On ya Multies Also.

Shoot yah in yah 'Sunday cloths' have you COOKED IN YAH LEATHER then JUKED IN AND SEVRED!
have you LOOK-THIN and FEATHERED! when i Scar his Top! cuz only time 'Marks the spot' is LOOKING FOR TRESURE

^^^ Yeah This Was Nice, Had a Nice Nameplay

Let me Start wid dah heat! HELLO?!?! youz a pussy spitting MELLOW AND LIGHT RHYMEZ!
get yah 'Gaurds on they feet' cuz i'm quick to put 'Mark on the Street' like YELLOW AND WHITE LINES

^^^ Umm Last Line Was Used Before i Think it Was like "ill Leave Mark On The Street Like Yellow Lines".
Somethin But What Ever Due To Me Seeing it Already Not As Hard Hitting. Not Sayin u Bit Just Wasn't Creative
With it.

I'm Bo Jangles wid Knifes; I'll TANGLE HIS LIFE, head, arms anD spine... Watch them DANGLE JUST RIGHT
Marks getting MANGLED ON SITE when i Grip dah Rachet, then put 'Tips to Magic' like CHRIS ANGEL's ADVICE

^^^ Yeah This Was a Killa Bar, That "Tips To Magic" Was Nice, it Was Hard Hittin i Was Feeling it.
Ya Flow Was Good To.


mah Crew Grip Barrels n Scopes, you only SHARE TOY RUGERS or Tare asses of SCARED BOY TUTORS!
Pussy, go on 'Start dah Tears! cuz i'll end 'Marks Career' like STEROID RUMOUR

^^^ it Was Straight ..Wasn't Really Feeling it

Overall, i Get The Feeling You're Forcing Multies, But its All
Good i Feel That About My Multies To. Just Work On Making You're
Bars More Creative. if u Heard a Played Punch, Dont Use it To Get Finish
Expand it, Make it Better. Think Of Something That Does it Also & Advance The Lines

Flow- Quix
Punches- Magic
Personals- Don't Remember Seeing None.
Wordplay/Metaphors-Magic
Nameplay- Defiantly Magic, His Was More Hardhitting And Creative. He Didnt Use Played Ones.
entertainment- Both, But magic Got This One.
Multies-Quix,

Vote- MAGIC MARK


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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

Miilz wrote:Flow Quix
Punches Quix
Personals Magic
Wordplay Magicmark
Metaphors Magic Mark
entertainment Quix
Multies Quix


Vote/ Quix Came A Lil Harder Nice Battle Though.

miilz.. ur a fuckin idiot.. topic locked for now
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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

topic re-opened, both of miilz vote will not count,

magic mark leads, 2-1

uppin for voters
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Post by ÐÛÇ£» »

Am i tripping or is this battle really from last month?
And i missed it..>Damn..i'll vote?
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Post by MagicMark »

thought battles ended after a few weeks, and the winner was the person with the most votes...

otherwise... vote up..
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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

eh fuck it, it was a close battle but voters r slackin n this been up for a while so im closing it n updating
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