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LEAVE DA BLOOD SPILLIN' IN DA STREETS

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LEAVE DA BLOOD SPILLIN' IN DA STREETS

Post by HKX »

Leave a nigga sum feed and I'll leave ya'll sum feed as well 1


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Post by Yung_Flow »

[font=Georgia]Nyce Shit Ma Nikka, Lyked Da East Coast Style Beat

Shit Was Dope, Props On Dis

Keep Doin' Yuh Thanq
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Post by El Original »

damn man this is a dope song bro are you famous in your area for this rap shit? damn good shit homie keep going
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Post by HKX »

good lookin on da feed niggaz and El I'm known in areas still tryin 2 keep my hustle on wit dis music if I was famous over here in da Chi I would've had a deal or sumthin already but u can't blow up overnight shit takes time and dedication I luv dis shit fuck da fame I jus wanna make music and get loot and go on vacations and shit uppin 4 more feed
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Post by Yungface Westside »

song waz tite. u got skills
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Post by Kurse »

Yea, I remember this shit from last weekend. I know mayne...when I heard this I was like dayum, I gotta drop sumthin wit a lil latin flavor too. But you came off wit dat Kintosol/Kid Frost kinda style on this.

Bonkers. Bonkers del tacos mayne! Cochino. hahaha Wtf!?
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Post by KcKal »

I thought it was pretty gay.................lol j/p man good job homie keep it up
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Post by Glamtrash »

Love the beat. But nothing about the song really pops out to me. The whole "I'm bad and I'll beat you" thing has been done over and over and over again, and without something that "pops out", it's just another one of those songs. Also, you don't sound as angry in this one as you usually do, and you should.

As for flow n shit, you got talent.

Not your best by any means, but still better than a lot of shit on here. Good job.
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Post by Viral »

lol i got dis song on my comp..u never finished recordin it...lol..shits raw....good shit man...mad props
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Post by MagicMark »

beat is cool.. lil latin feel..

in my opinion.. you got an easier listen to voice.... however there is some simple as shit.. "make you look... gay".. etc.. thats almost embaressin'

to be a respected audio artist, you still need dope lyrics or a new edge.. and the first verse wernt it..

not sure if im loving the pause before every sentence ending word.. kinda sounds a little odd..

flow is solid.. but not too hard with below average lyrics..

if you just chilling this is a solid track man.. but im all lyricism.. so to me its lacking.. tho if you having a smoke and drink this could be dope..

hook is pretty cool also..
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