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I roll up my socks tight, try to open the door but the nob cries
veins panting, i let my palms dry...turn back to scream "Mom Im???"
"drawn to them like...like bug lights..then i feel an abrupt bite
their disgusting, infected with moss blight, but not quite
now im sinking into abyss, into cosmos..its gist, is soft-though
they turn to commits colliding, leaving me only as fossils

Im wanna turn christian, Im scared
inject myself in the kitchen, Im theirs
x2

with no breasts head or legs, strapped down I layed
Im only in a visual sence, watching them eatting the prey
my limbs in bags of messages and sent, my nerves tingle in pain
intestines dispensed, my body collected in single remains
the up and down slashing sounds like the guillotine
they grab my head as i watch and feel them kissing me
tasting and nibbling and then with one bite I die

its weird,
only wen i smoke Im here, but i love it : ) so i dont quit
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...i was lost for the most part, very weird indeed.. hard to even judge it since it seems a bit drifted from sense, and....r u a girl? cuz it said no breasts head or legs... so im not sure if u were speaking about urself and ur breasts were chopped off or somethin? lol i couldn't really grasp much off of this except for bits and pieces
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it was pretty all of over the place
could'nt follow it but it's uniqueness
but it aint gone get ya anywhere unless ya sort ya rhymescheme out
keep'em comin tho
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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