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I blaze in amazement, its sacrid when i leave yuh mind leakin like basements,
Erase yuh face kid to faceless im tasteless the way i brake yuh face on the pavement,
Send a plague in pages aimin to spray pain in brains it aint fabricated,
I penetrated, i stay forever faded for those who never made it,
forced to be medicated, wit seditives i sedate and set a date to seperate it,
Our generation is feather weighted ive waited for the rate to be heavy weighted,
the stakes and changes could save the nation but we feel like were obligated,
to fuck each other like we masterbated, you'd prolly hate it, what i jus stated,
my statements straight hit like bricks ima mason, my hearts racin, im paced -n-,
to blaze scripts thru my chest plate wit plain whits you couldnt "bust" wit 8 tits,
Im steel so stainless, its plain bliss how your rhymes are musty like stained pits,
I slay wit my tape mixed, dodgin yuh shots like the matrix,
you could say shit, to make hits wit 8 flips, your flameless,
ima pilot i stay lit, you could blaze shit, even if you put fire to your basement and inflamed it,
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Post by 8th »

nice man, real nice. LOT of multis, which obviously made it flow really good.

forced to be medicated, wit seditives i sedate and set a date to seperate it,
Our generation is feather weighted ive waited for the rate to be heavy weighted,

^i guess thats my favorite line, but all of them were good. I'd say the upper half was better than the lower, but it was still good. we should collab sometime.
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hypnitizinminds, hit me up on aim im usually on in the early afternoons and later nights. im always lookin to collab audio or text
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Post by drunken jesus »

pretty ill
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]

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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

thanx man, its appreciated
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Post by 8th »

yo, check out my drop 'Multis Multis Multis'

and ill hit you up about that collab when i get some time
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