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I Go Balistic-Days, Abusinn-Weed-With-Friends ..
These Simplistic-Ways ,Usen-Need-Ta-End...
Once i Take a Breather-Ive Learned Amongst Us The Reapers-Live
We 'See Levels' Of Complexity But Need Ta Take a Deeper-Dive...
Go-Past The Black-&-White Even The Shade-Of-Gray,Let Thoughts
Flow-Fast,The Lack-Of-Light Will Soon Fade-Away..Potray The Day
As a Page From Your Years-Chapter,The Meaning Of Being gets Clear-Faster,
Its 2 Enjoy Every Moment Never Fear-Laughter..
Its Not About Money & Whips Or Honeys With Tit's, you Sit-Strugglin
Quit-Hustlin,Don't Destroy-Ya-health..Take a Deeper Dive Into Lifes Meaning... ENJOY-YA-SELF...
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Its Not About Money & Whips Or Honeys With Tit's, you Sit-Strugglin
Quit-Hustlin,Don't Destroy-Ya-health..Take a Deeper Dive Into Lifes Meaning... ENJOY-YA-SELF...

Nice Closure. That Money An Whips Line was Pretty Dope. Over All Good Flow.
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-.HaZarD.- wrote:I Go Balistic-Days, Abusinn-Weed-With-Friends ..
These Simplistic-Ways ,Usen-Need-Ta-End...
Once i Take a Breather-Ive Learned Amongst Us The Reapers-Live
We 'See Levels' Of Complexity But Need Ta Take a Deeper-Dive...
Go-Past The Black-&-White Even The Shade-Of-Gray,Let Thoughts
Flow-Fast,The Lack-Of-Light Will Soon Fade-Away..Potray The Day
As a Page From Your Years-Chapter,The Meaning Of Being gets Clear-Faster,
Its 2 Enjoy Every Moment Never Fear-Laughter..
Its Not About Money & Whips Or Honeys With Tit's, you Sit-Strugglin
Quit-Hustlin,Don't Destroy-Ya-health..Take a Deeper Dive Into Lifes Meaning... ENJOY-YA-SELF...
I'm impressed again Hazard.

"We 'See Levels' Of Complexity But Need Ta Take a Deeper-Dive"

I thought this was a creative line.

Overall, I thought you stayed on topic. The message was clear along with the rhymes. Keep it up!
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Uppin 4 Feed..
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I like this... makes me smile all around (no homo)
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no Homoness Taken ..
Thanks 4 Da Feed Homie
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Nice rhyme bro.
I like the whole verse. was feelin it man.
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keep this up haz..i thought you explained something pretty vivid for the readers of course it had that commercial tip but it was still on point.
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Good Lookin Out Fam
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