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Sintakz - Stenciled Me.

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This is basically a symbolic topical I done. Sketch/bones, Colour/Personality, Gloss/Skin, hair etc etc. It's an extend'd metaphor comparin' the human body & soul to a cartoon version. Enjoy.


Sketch.
Start An Outline, Squiggle My Structured Scribbles,
Foreword To Fill. With Rivers Of Ruptured Ripples!
Complete The Scape. Lines Solid & Cement My Shape,
A Continuos Spine That Follows To Present A Stage!
Of Uncorrected Grey. Perfected Then Pardoned Slack,
Eraser Rubbed Out. Im Protected By Hardened Black!
Plain Instinct. Connect Colours Who Gift The Link,
Patiently Portray My Personality & Uplift The Ink!

Colour.
Splash Seronades. Squirt Standards. Spirit My Soul,
Easy. Elementary Elegant Even Exquisite But Whole!
Advanced Amalgamate Acrylic. Aimed To An Abstract,
Tools Turnin' Tangents, Trained With The Transact!
String Complex Orientations. Travel & Begin Sheets,
Masterpeice Maintains Marvel. That Goes Skin Deep!
Miniscule Definitions Deliver. Freein' My Breathin',
Genes Gross To Gloss. As My Inner Bein' Is Seein'!

Gloss.
Protect Principals. Structure Sentences To Syntax,
Coats Of Layers. Rally The Repentence Of Thin Wax!
Slothly Thick. Drip Dryin', Suspendin' A Stranger,
& Fear Freely Infuriatin' The Defendin' Of Danger!
Irregular Inner Idol Invitin' It To Demure & Dine,
Trap & Thicken, Slowly Solidifyd. Secure My Shine!
Electric But Everlastin' To Encase A Heart Of Steel,
Till Time Tragically Tallies .. & I Start To Peel!
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Post by Haz »

This Deff Was ill!! ...
Loved The Creativity ..
The Vocab Was Bananas.. How U Did ya Own Alphabetic Slaughta Was Nuts ..
Multi's On Point .. Complexity Was Deff There , Consistency Brought
Creative Topical Mos Deff ...

Eraser Rubbed Out. Im Protected By Hardened Black!
Plain Instinct. Connect Colours Who Gift The Link,
Patiently Portray My Personality & Uplift The Ink!

Colour.

Advanced Amalgamate Acrylic. Aimed To An Abstract,
Tools Turnin' Tangents, Trained With The Transact!
String Complex Orientations. Travel & Begin Sheets,
Masterpeice Maintains Marvel. That Goes Skin Deep!


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Appreciate the peep homie. Any piece's needin' feed just drop a link iight.
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Post by complexity »

"Splash Seronades. Squirt Standards. Spirit My Soul,
Easy. Elementary Elegant Even Exquisite But Whole!
Advanced Amalgamate Acrylic. Aimed To An Abstract,
Tools Turnin' Tangents, Trained With The Transact!
String Complex Orientations. Travel & Begin Sheets,
Masterpeice Maintains Marvel. That Goes Skin Deep!
Miniscule Definitions Deliver. Freein' My Breathin',
Genes Gross To Gloss. As My Inner Bein' Is Seein'! "

By far my favorite part.

A few forced lines here and there. I don't know what the hell you meant by trained with the transact.

When you use an extensive vocabulary, things definitely need to make perfect sense, because people are just being introduced to the words. They will have to look them up without an absolute grasp of the word.

A consistent drop. I'd give it a 8.5/10, the part that I quoted at least a 9.3/10.
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Post by Sintakz »

Transact means conductin' business lol. Train'd at doin' you're job. Many way's you can confirm the phrase. Thanks for the feed yo anyway, majorly appreciated.
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Start An Outline, Squiggle My Structured Scribbles,
Foreword To Fill. With Rivers Of Ruptured Ripples!
Complete The Scape. Lines Solid & Cement My Shape,
A Continuos Spine That Follows To Present A Stage!
Of Uncorrected Grey. Perfected Then Pardoned Slack,
Eraser Rubbed Out. Im Protected By Hardened Black!
Plain Instinct. Connect Colours Who Gift The Link,
Patiently Portray My Personality & Uplift The Ink!


that was ill man. Very nice. Keep them coming, yo.
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