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Momma Always Said...

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Momma Always said,"Life is like light and dark"
the good times, the bad times, and aftershock's
you can change the world, just find your direction,
rewind existance, imply perfection.

Eye the sky, as it follow's. watch it finally breath.
shift the sands with the mountians and sea's
you can do it baby boy, you just gotta believe...

As I lay back on the grass and look at the trees,
I reflect on the good times and conversations we seen
thank you momma for being the one to help me.




Thought I would drop a little free post poem, tell me what you all think.
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Post by precise »

not bad dude, not my favorite but its a good quick read
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Post by precise »

by the way, nice stevie wonder glasses in the display pic man hahaha
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LOL haha yea man haha.
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Post by Glamtrash »

Not bad. Didn't really "grab" me in anyway but I'm assuming you just threw it together for the fuck of it. Keep droppin'. You've got potential.
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