.:.: Straight Rippin :.:.

[complexity]

I AM....the best n the truest-u-see, cuz my flow influencing-thee,
Flesh.. aint another as fluid-as-he, the liquid flows oh so lucratively

(I like that, its pretty smooth)

And he's someone you-couldn't-be, leave ya whole crew-in-defeat
its why he gotta be the cruelest-emcee, to drop heat n ruin-the-beats
And come through-with-the-heat, on a drop top cruisin-the-streets

(more smoothness)

To me, sayin-some-words is like sprayin-the-third, slayin-you-birds,
Aint nobody see you 'messin with shit' unless you playin-with-turd

(coughs)

Pronunciation-disturbed to make it prove a demonstration-to-herbs...
Continuation-my-verbs is like an allegorical representation-ya-heard?

(Good vocabulary and makes sense)

So try to understand-the-definition, niggas cant stand-the-demolition
I mean someone's gotta do it and I'm the man to handle-the-position...

(smooth)

Its amber-that-im-dishin, u cudnt bring fire with a candle-in-the-kitchen,
Like tryin to command-a-politician, i leave no chance-for-the-opposition

(that could have ended with a better punchline)

Tryna be the illest like cancer-is-the-mission, n so i answer-indecisions
So high its like im dancin-wit-the-pigeons, ill slice ya mask-into-divisions

(Good rhyming, but I don't like the content)

Poor fuck, u cant afford a check so im sendin pampers-to-ya-children!
Got u niggas screamin "oh my God!" like im the fuckin answer-to-religion..

(Best punchline of the verse)

its like a curse-laid to burst-flames, first to have ya hearse-made
ill fuck u over more than the Vietnamese havin the "shirts-made"

(nah)

cuz the fo-fifth got u "dodgin the block" more than a "reverse-lay"
i dont spit it or talk it bitch i squirt-game, so when the verse-made,

That first punchline could have been really sick, I'd reuse it by actually saying reverse lay up)

i already got the broad on her knees like she ready to "church-pray"
so im leavin her skirt-slain, and likely to give you a red shirt-stain

(filler)

if u talk bout "ill" then im the worst-case, ill have the third-blaze
killin roaches like i dispersed-raid while u screamin "it hurts-mayne"

(ah)

FLESH WOUND...the real reason paramedics is grabbin the first-aid...

(ok)

Overall, obviously a very solid verse. I decided to break it all down so you can see what I personally like and didn't.

8.6/10

[precise]

cuz the fo-fifth got u "dodgin the block" more than a "reverse-lay"
hahaha niiiiccceeee^^^^

Got u niggas screamin "oh my God!" like im the fuckin answer-to-religion..
this was pretty nice^^^

i liked it dude, i really enjoy seein rhymeschemes gettin carried for longer than a bar or two, few nice lines tucked away in it, n that closer was pretty sick, good shit bro