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GENOCIDE FEAT LADY X, KURSE, LOW, AND KO

Post by HKX »

HAVEN'T BEEN ON DIS INNA MIN DECIDED 2 DROP DIS IN DA CHAMBER RECORDED DIS LAST WEEK AT KURSE'S CRIB KURSE DID DA MIXIN SHIT PEEP IT OUT 4 A NIGGA AND LET ME KNO WAT YA'LL THINK AND ILL LEAVE FEED BACK THANKS AND 1


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"Genocide"
HKX feat. Lady X, Kurse, Low & KO
Album: BONAFIDE
Written By: each participating artist
Mixed By: R. Bueno
Recorded @ B1-Studio in Joliet, IL
Anger Manij'ment Entertainment Inc.
All Rights Reserved 2008 ©
(Kurse, HKX, Lady X & KO are brought to you courtesy of A.M.E. Inc.)
(Low is currently an unsigned independent artist)

Song Order:
Verse 1 - Kurse
Verse 2 - Low (negotiations of being the newest artist on the A.M.E. label)
Verse 3 - HKX
Verse 4 - KO
Hook - HKX & Lady X
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Post by precise »

i love that beat!! damn, kinda jedi mind tricks or army of pharoes style, good choice

flows were on point, interestin hook,

rhymescheme was sick in that second verse, n i liked the effects used on it

ur verse was sick, well written, im a fan of ur flow dude, it reminds me of someone, just cant think of who for some reason, itll hit me eventually,

anyways sick track, its playlist worthy
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Post by Haz »

Lady X Voice is DEff Annoyin As Fuck LOL
I didn't Like How Yall Both Said Da Chorus. u Shoulda Jus Done it...
Low Was Pretty Straight, Wuldnt Call Him a Punchline Rappa But He Wus On Point
Kurse Had a Koo Verse , Low Had a Nice Verse , U Had a Koo Verse , K.O. Wus aiight.

I Liked The Beat, But i Ain Like What U Made This Song Out to Be
Anyways Keep droppin
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Post by Cee4 »

definitly a nice track. Kurse verse smashed it. the Low guy had some nice lines. HKX came harder than normal here. KO was pretty decent too. Wasnt feeling the hook. I woulda had just HKX or the girl doing it on their own. The two voices fucked it up a bit. The beat was cool too.
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thanks 4 da feed niggaz I'll leave sum feed 4 u niggaz asap lol
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uppin 4 more feed if possible
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Post by drunken jesus »

kurse - delivery was dope made the verse really stand out, rhyme scheme was better than usual, no complaints really

hook - didn't like it, like a few others of said the two of you at the same time didn't sound good at all, two people rapping at the same time really never works unless your harmonizing & ya'll weren't

low - lyrically this was good, liked the dawsons creek line, flow could've been alot better though

hkx - solid verse, nothing really stuck out

ko - lyrically solid, but the delivery could've been alot better, couldn't understand a couple words

beat - shit was pretty ill, like precise said sounded like some old jedi mind tricks shit
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
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Post by HKX »

good lookin on da feed jesus appreciate da feedback good lookin out on it thanks niggaz
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Post by Dead Silence »

Kurse's verse
legit as always
9/10


Low's verse:
sounded a bit like Eminem (the old version of em tho)
decent lyrics
flow was choppy in some places
7/10

Hkx-
diff type of flow from him
i like it. switchin it up a bit its nice
flow was good..on key
lyrics legit
sounded like viral
8.5/10

KO:
nice shit
flow was key
lyrics coulda been better
8.5/10

Chorus:
didnt like at all
just wasnt my kinda chorus

overall
it was legit an ame production

9/10
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

its all been said but if i were to choose jesus said it best... verses were off the chain, hook was not good by any means... 8.9/10 homie
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